Reviews for be mine
daisukiklove chapter 1 . 11/22/2013
So sweet3
The Broken Idealist chapter 1 . 5/5/2013
Artfully written, and I did indeed enjoy it.
The Siege chapter 1 . 3/21/2013
AW. SO BEAUTIFUL. I especially love the Peter Pan stanza-super duper sweet. I love your writing. TT_TT
mr schneebly chapter 1 . 9/2/2012
Please, never stop writing. Beautiful.
anachronistic chapter 1 . 7/20/2012
the last line is perfect this whole thing is perfect
young and the reckless chapter 1 . 6/3/2010
i love this. indubitably.
flunkybubbleshorts chapter 1 . 4/7/2010
:)

I'm no poetry critic - but i like this :)

I liked how it was casual yet deep...

Sukanya
Professoress chapter 1 . 3/27/2010
Really lovely.
Aurora Corona chapter 1 . 3/21/2009
Ohmygosh... This was brilliant...

Those metaphors were simply AMAZING.
Mascara is evil chapter 1 . 1/18/2009
I have never been in love, i've been infatuated, enamored, and a whold bunch of other big ass words but never in love. I've never really minded that fact but this made me almost yearn to be in love, so that I can truly understand what you're saying. This was very well written, beautiful and meaningful and with a depth of though that didn't require annoyingly obscure thoughts and images in order for the feelings to get across. Thank you very much for writing this.
Heise chapter 1 . 8/2/2008
Loved it.

I ran out of adjectives and superlatives, sorry.

The best I can do is tell you I really liked it.

I think the first story I read of yours was To Be A Suitable Heroine. I'm not too sure, but I remember the way reading Counting Chickens seriously made a huge impact on me. Mimi was such a lovely girl ... :)

My favorite stanza is the Wendy one. It's so pretty! Peter Pan love stories are all the rage, damn.
awww chapter 1 . 6/5/2008
you made me cry! especially the wendy stanza! the whole imagery of him as a lost boy and you his wendy. aw. let's stay in never-never-land!
Snowhite chapter 1 . 1/18/2008
this was beautiful.
proud2bus chapter 1 . 1/10/2008
Wow... that was beautiful.

I love the lullaby and the Wendy part especially. It's just so good. I can almost hear someone speaking the words out... it's that good. : D
awaiting.rain chapter 1 . 12/26/2007
god, i love this.

i wish i was able to write something like this.
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