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![]() ![]() ![]() So sweet3 |
![]() ![]() ![]() Artfully written, and I did indeed enjoy it. |
![]() ![]() ![]() AW. SO BEAUTIFUL. I especially love the Peter Pan stanza-super duper sweet. I love your writing. TT_TT |
![]() ![]() ![]() Please, never stop writing. Beautiful. |
![]() ![]() ![]() the last line is perfect this whole thing is perfect |
![]() ![]() ![]() i love this. indubitably. |
![]() ![]() ![]() :) I'm no poetry critic - but i like this :) I liked how it was casual yet deep... Sukanya |
![]() ![]() ![]() Really lovely. |
![]() ![]() ![]() Ohmygosh... This was brilliant... Those metaphors were simply AMAZING. |
![]() ![]() ![]() I have never been in love, i've been infatuated, enamored, and a whold bunch of other big ass words but never in love. I've never really minded that fact but this made me almost yearn to be in love, so that I can truly understand what you're saying. This was very well written, beautiful and meaningful and with a depth of though that didn't require annoyingly obscure thoughts and images in order for the feelings to get across. Thank you very much for writing this. |
![]() ![]() ![]() Loved it. I ran out of adjectives and superlatives, sorry. The best I can do is tell you I really liked it. I think the first story I read of yours was To Be A Suitable Heroine. I'm not too sure, but I remember the way reading Counting Chickens seriously made a huge impact on me. Mimi was such a lovely girl ... :) My favorite stanza is the Wendy one. It's so pretty! Peter Pan love stories are all the rage, damn. |
![]() ![]() you made me cry! especially the wendy stanza! the whole imagery of him as a lost boy and you his wendy. aw. let's stay in never-never-land! |
![]() ![]() ![]() this was beautiful. |
![]() ![]() ![]() Wow... that was beautiful. I love the lullaby and the Wendy part especially. It's just so good. I can almost hear someone speaking the words out... it's that good. : D |
![]() ![]() ![]() god, i love this. i wish i was able to write something like this. |