So sweet3

Artfully written, and I did indeed enjoy it.

AW. SO BEAUTIFUL. I especially love the Peter Pan stanza-super duper sweet. I love your writing. TT_TT

Please, never stop writing. Beautiful.

the last line is perfect this whole thing is perfect

i love this. indubitably.

:)

I'm no poetry critic - but i like this :)

I liked how it was casual yet deep...

Sukanya

Really lovely.

Ohmygosh... This was brilliant...

Those metaphors were simply AMAZING.

I have never been in love, i've been infatuated, enamored, and a whold bunch of other big ass words but never in love. I've never really minded that fact but this made me almost yearn to be in love, so that I can truly understand what you're saying. This was very well written, beautiful and meaningful and with a depth of though that didn't require annoyingly obscure thoughts and images in order for the feelings to get across. Thank you very much for writing this.

Loved it.

I ran out of adjectives and superlatives, sorry.

The best I can do is tell you I really liked it.

I think the first story I read of yours was To Be A Suitable Heroine. I'm not too sure, but I remember the way reading Counting Chickens seriously made a huge impact on me. Mimi was such a lovely girl ... :)

My favorite stanza is the Wendy one. It's so pretty! Peter Pan love stories are all the rage, damn.

you made me cry! especially the wendy stanza! the whole imagery of him as a lost boy and you his wendy. aw. let's stay in never-never-land!

this was beautiful.

Wow... that was beautiful.

I love the lullaby and the Wendy part especially. It's just so good. I can almost hear someone speaking the words out... it's that good. : D

god, i love this.

i wish i was able to write something like this.