|Reviews for be mine|
| Respect Is Sexy chapter 1 . 10/5/2007
It's hard to write a long review for a poem, so I'll just give you a
| anamika chapter 1 . 10/4/2007
ok this may be a really bad analogy but it looks like it was just swirling and swirling in your head and you simply threw it up (told you it sounds bad)
but this is amzing seriously, it feels like rain-soaked earth and flesh and un-deniably real, tangible almost...
| fluffykitty chapter 1 . 10/4/2007
Hot DAMN, that was beautiful. I haven't read beautiful poetry like that in ages.
| That Girl You Love chapter 1 . 10/4/2007
holy freaking cow, babe.
i loved this.
i LOVED this.
partly because i consider myself horrible at poetry, i'm that much more impressed when people write it WELL.
i love the way it flows without rhyming outright. i love the alliteration and the rhythm.
honey buns, you wow WOW me!
whoever you wrote this for must be a very special boy indeed. hee.
| jammi chapter 1 . 10/4/2007
Even though it's not everything I really like it so far. It made me smile and it flowed really well, really song-like I think.
| kate.munro chapter 1 . 10/4/2007
That was wonderful. I'm very picky with my poetry but that was so beautiful. Great work.
| Artemis Anderson chapter 1 . 10/4/2007
This is beautifully written. Kudos.
| luv me like no other chapter 1 . 10/4/2007
This is really cute and beautiful, nice job!