oh shit! dun dun da dah! here comes trouble!

You know what? I may have to stuff wheat cereal down David's throat for commenting on her weight! Jeez you had a good thing going and then POOF! you ruin it with a stupid comment about weight.

And then we're back to Bryce. Bryce, Bryce, Bryce... You know if he hadn't tried to rape Jamie, I might like him. But I don't. I like David. So Bryce better step off.

I'm drinking a Jamba Juice right now so I'm a little WHOO, but not as much because I... Okay nevermind about my life, who really cares?

YES I DID USE DOUBLE SPACES! I decided to try that. D Anyway, fantabulously awesome as always!

-Halani (You know what, we should make our own sexiest men magazine. Woot!)

i got really excited when i saw that there was a new chapter up ]]]] this story is to like die for! please please keep me posted.

Yes post faster haha

anyway that was so good

I liked it when she said I have no sister

so, will ya, please, update soon? )

that was so good

Aww. I still love David. If something happens to him I'm going to be really REALLY mad! So you better not make anything bad happen to him or I'll force you to eat wheat cereal! MUAHAHA!

Actually no I wouldn't do that. I would politely tell you to eat it. D

Anyway! I'm still mad at Bryce. He's like so... I don't know what the word is... Um... Odd? No that's not it... If I think of it I'll tell you.

But I swear if David dies in a car crash, or Bryce does something bad to him, or if he takes Jamie away... OH HES GOING TO GET THE WHEAT CRAP! Not you. I promise.

-Halani (I promise I'm not going crazy, it's the caffeine and sugar)

AW OMG YAYAYA YAYAYYA YAYAYA I LOVE IT! ]]]]] I WENT FROM LAYING DOWN ON MY BED READING THIS TO AN UPRET POSITION AND ALEART LOL GOOD JOB! KEEP IT UP!

AW That was Adorable!

I love David! D

Oh just to let you know I didn't end up having cinnamon rolls for breakfast (P) I had cereal (yuck). But it's all better now that I read this!

That was Awesomely fantabulously good! I liked it and I like David!

Update whenever possible!

-Halani

amazingly awesome! i really love this storyy please please please let me know when the next one comes out ]]]]

this chapter is kinda sad ( but great one! D

Yes 'Revenge(6)'

Psh, I won't hurt YOU. Bryce and Jan well I'm not so sure about. Jeez Bryce and Jan completely tick me off sometimes. They deserve each other those little...

ANYWAYS... Um Yeah, if Bryce doesn't pay, I'll guarantee I'll jump into this computer and MAKE HIM PAY! Okay I can't really do that, but I can dream right?

Right. D

Hm I don't think there's anything else to say. Nope nothing! NADA! EXCEPT that it was a fantabulous chapter!

Have fun with your umm Paris Je t'aime DVD. Umm whatever that is... Yeah I don't pay attention to media or movies. Or whatever it is...

Anyway, update soon but not TOO soon! Okay there isn't a too soon. Oh well, I'll just shut up now.

-Halani D

Oh DUDUDUDUDDUN

Yes, I HAVE had more than my normal amount of sugar, and the room is a little spinny...

ANYWAY.. GO JAN and JAMIE! Beat the freakin' crap out of Bryce! He freakin' deserves it. Gosh dang I can't wait for the next chapter.

Stupid Bryce with his stupid mind wanting to rape poor Jamie. Ugh, stupidness!

*announcer voice* Will Jan and Jamie beat up Bryce? Will he confess to the horrible act? Tune in next time for another episode of BECAUSE OF A BOY.

Ahem, now that that's over... UPDATE SOON!

D Halani

omg! i love this! you need to need to let me know when the next chapter is up ]]]] great story

OMG I hate him S .. but we love you too haha update soon please, pwease