| Reviews for Because of a Boy |
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   Halani chapter 11 . 11/3/2007 AWW I LOVE YOU TOO! And now my little moment is over... On with the review! Jeez Bryce is, um how to put this, INSANE! Shesh! I thought he was a good guy for a while but then he pulls a stunt like this! HOW DARE HE! Stupid little Bryce with his stupid little brain and his stupid livingness! I promise my ranting is done. That was a sad chapter I feel so bad for Jamie. I can't even imagine what she's going through right now. And since you love me so very much... Update soon? -Halani |
| Sarah-Ray chapter 10 . 10/31/2007 Halani said it all, lol :P |
| Halani chapter 10 . 10/30/2007 NOW it all makes sense! Now about this chapter ten... First of all, AMEN TO JAMIE! Do not wait for stupid Bryce. I think Jan deserves him! He's a jerk. Secondly, okay I don't have a secondly. BUT I really liked this chapter although depressing as it was. Billy's such a cutie! And now that I am done with my rambling on and on about your chapters, I shall tell you that I gotta know what happens next. I won't say to update soon because I got to read two chapters today! But whenever you can update, I'd appreciate it! Sorry for the freakishly long review. Got's lot's on my mind! -Halani |
| Sarah-Ray chapter 8 . 10/30/2007 Can't wait for the next update :D |
| Halani chapter 8 . 10/29/2007 Yay first review of the new chapter! And now that my stupid moment is over... Hm... I'm not really sure what to say about this chapter. It was like... I'm not sure... I'm not saying it was bad! I just don't have anything to say... But tis always good to review! And now my rambling is over with... It was fantabulous! There were a couple spelling mistakes (I don't mean to be nitpicky but just wanted to letcha know), but other than that it was an amazing update! Can't wait to see what happens next! |
| Sarah-Ray chapter 7 . 10/24/2007 JERK! I don't think he'll keep his promise :P update soon |
| Halani chapter 7 . 10/23/2007 Uh uh uh! Jan shall not be getting Bryce. I do not care if I have to virtually zap myself into the computer and knock some sense into Bryce, SHE SHALL NOT GET HIM! Nope, not at all, not ever. ANYWAY... Will Bryce keep his promise? Will Jamie get hurt more? Will Jan do whatever Jan's gonna do? WHAT IS GONNA HAPPEN? I can't wait for another wonderbah (heh fun word) update! |
| Halani chapter 6 . 10/23/2007 Wow. Um, Jan can be really rude. I feel bad for poor Bryce. That was real good though! I can't wait to see what happens next! Will Jamie fall for Bryce? Will David make her stay? WHAT WILL HAPPEN! Tune in for scenes of our next episode! ;D Please update soon! -Halani |
| Sarah-Ray chapter 6 . 10/23/2007 awesome! update soon please. |
| MacKitty chapter 1 . 10/22/2007 I like your plot, and I like your characters. In the sentence, 'She knew I was scared that I played it save that I want a boyfriend,' do you mean 'safe' instead of 'save'? And just some general editing comments, like missing commas, and capitalizations. But that can be solved with a good editor. Hope that helps. |
| Sarah-Ray chapter 5 . 10/18/2007 Jan seems to hate Jamie Jamie is much like me in most of things lol thats why i like her more the Jan anyway that was great update soon or whenever you can :D ! |
| Sarah-Ray chapter 4 . 10/18/2007 that was realy good, sorry it took me a while to read it, i've been busy with school stuff lately, so yeah sorry. |
| Halani chapter 5 . 10/11/2007 All I can say is... Wowzers. These were wonderbah updates! I can't wait to see if she's going to the party or not and what shall happen if she does! BUM BUM BUM! -Halani |
| Sarah-Ray chapter 3 . 10/6/2007 Jan is so .. dunno, I HATE HER lol :P ... Wainting for the next chapter :D |
| Halani chapter 3 . 10/5/2007 O SHOCKER! That was not said sarcastically just to letcha know. Well she deserves the hot guy not Jan! Awesome possum update! Can't wait to see what happens next! DUN DUN DUN! -Halani |