Reviews for The Daughter of the Light Kings
AlexdR chapter 3 . 10/7/2007
all right, good second chapter, though its pretty short. Your grasp of Norse myth is amazing. Even though this is clearly a seperate story, I can see it just being another part of the Germanic/Norse mythos. I think I would like another "scene", in which we can read about Sigurn and her betrothed. You seem to be breaking the ancient "show us, don't tell us" rule a bit too much in the chapter having events fly by without any real description. oh yeah, the appendix is helpful too!

Alex
AlexdR chapter 1 . 10/5/2007
you have done it again sir. I'm intrigued by this story. What is an elemri? an elemental? I am reminded of Actaeon and Artemis, is there a conection? the only thing I found wrong was the stag saying he was a "freak". I would suggest a different word.