Reviews for When You're Around
Otakuami chapter 1 . 10/25/2020
Bad guy meeting not so good girl. with similar interests. Their hot and cold relationship based on lust and disagreements is interesting to read.
Charley Barley chapter 1 . 11/25/2014
I wanted to hear what Uncle Jay's part in this was! But I suppose we're supposed to figure that out on our own. However I'm a little dense, and it took some time, haha.

Cadence is different, and it's fun. He's human, that's what I'm trying to say - we always get the perfect guy, super hot and stuff, but Cadence is HUMAN. And perfect. Chris is a great touch.

I'm glad to have found this rarity. It's better to be rare than have a whole bunch of similar stories, neh?
APassionForReadingAndWriting chapter 1 . 9/8/2013
Aw, this was so cute! I like the romantic stories which have bad boys! Great job! I love it :)
porcelainstars chapter 1 . 1/15/2012
Such a good story!
non.graceful chapter 1 . 5/10/2011
Nocturnal silhouette chapter 1 . 11/18/2008
Loved this!
jenc11 chapter 1 . 8/16/2008
I'm not really one for lip rings and cigarettes, but Cadence is a really nice guy. :P Loved this one-shot.
ghepardo chapter 1 . 8/4/2008
This was overall a great oneshot story. I loved reading it.
jaded image chapter 1 . 7/1/2008
Aww, I thought that was super cute :D I like how you made the girl the more laid-back one, instead of constantly fussing over herself and every move she makes. It's a nice change. And Cadence sounds really sweet, especially the part where he bursts in with his speech. And turning 18 and buying cigs and porn. Hahaha.
x3life chapter 1 . 6/3/2008
aww this was so cute!
kristenn987 chapter 1 . 5/10/2008
i really liked this story.

i liked how you set it up to seem like she may get with chris at first but then she ended up with cadence. they're too cute.
Kjersti chapter 1 . 3/11/2008
Aww, how sweet. :D Cadence's rant was incredibly cute. Good work. I loved it.
IndigoAzucena chapter 1 . 12/6/2007
I liked it, definitely.

On the favorites list it goes!
AideenK chapter 1 . 11/25/2007

made me happy in a short time :)
Isheth chapter 1 . 10/12/2007
I liked it a lot. Nice and light. It would've been better if you had built up Chris' character a bit more, though. As of now it just seems like he pops in once in a while to flirt-quite flat compared to all the development happening with Vivian and Cadence. But it's a cute story. Keep writing, and good luck!
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