Bad guy meeting not so good girl. with similar interests. Their hot and cold relationship based on lust and disagreements is interesting to read.

I wanted to hear what Uncle Jay's part in this was! But I suppose we're supposed to figure that out on our own. However I'm a little dense, and it took some time, haha.

Cadence is different, and it's fun. He's human, that's what I'm trying to say - we always get the perfect guy, super hot and stuff, but Cadence is HUMAN. And perfect. Chris is a great touch.

I'm glad to have found this rarity. It's better to be rare than have a whole bunch of similar stories, neh?

Aw, this was so cute! I like the romantic stories which have bad boys! Great job! I love it :)

Such a good story!

Cute

Loved this!

I'm not really one for lip rings and cigarettes, but Cadence is a really nice guy. :P Loved this one-shot.

This was overall a great oneshot story. I loved reading it.

Aww, I thought that was super cute :D I like how you made the girl the more laid-back one, instead of constantly fussing over herself and every move she makes. It's a nice change. And Cadence sounds really sweet, especially the part where he bursts in with his speech. And turning 18 and buying cigs and porn. Hahaha.

aww this was so cute!

i really liked this story.

i liked how you set it up to seem like she may get with chris at first but then she ended up with cadence. they're too cute.

Aww, how sweet. :D Cadence's rant was incredibly cute. Good work. I loved it.

I liked it, definitely.

On the favorites list it goes!

nice.

made me happy in a short time :)

I liked it a lot. Nice and light. It would've been better if you had built up Chris' character a bit more, though. As of now it just seems like he pops in once in a while to flirt-quite flat compared to all the development happening with Vivian and Cadence. But it's a cute story. Keep writing, and good luck!