Reviews for The World Will Break Your Heart
OoohLookACat chapter 16 . 10/22/2007

sounds like an awesome day

i was thinking that sean woulda made a reference to the husband/wife/cheese thing

when kylie called sean her husband

but nope

no comment lol

but it was cute

we had something similar to Plimoth Plantation

it was caled "Olde Sydney Town"

and it was like pretty much the same thing

Sydney back when it was first colonised

but Australia was originally meant to be a prison land mostly convicts and slave like stuff

occasional shops and stuff

not sure if it closed down or not...

m i should find out


interesting chapter

sounds like tonnes of fun

and sean and kylie are so adorable together lol

can't wait for more

kurstinhartsyou chapter 15 . 10/22/2007
I'm glad you introduced Derek.


He's such an ass.

I didn't expect that.

Ah, I can't wait for more.

Elle8605 chapter 15 . 10/21/2007
Once again...great chapter. :D Aww... at the end of her school year she's moving in with Sean... tampons and all! haha. They seem so cute together. I wonder what drama you'll come up with when they start living together. ;)
OoohLookACat chapter 15 . 10/21/2007
..and so a new life together begins


so cute

i love those two

and lmao at psychic powers haha

can't wait for more

phelps112 chapter 14 . 10/20/2007
very cute story, i like it so far
kurstinhartsyou chapter 14 . 10/19/2007
Another amazing chapter.

You just know how to write this story.

Ah, I have a feeling it's coming to an end.



Good job.

Can't wait for another update.
Elle8605 chapter 14 . 10/19/2007
Once again...great chapter. I absolutely love Spartacus. So cute! I also love her friends and Sean for doing such a great thing for Kylie for Christmas. Loved it!
OoohLookACat chapter 14 . 10/18/2007

such a cute chapter

and such an adorable little puppy!

i googled it

and aw

so cute!

just wanna hug the little guy!

hah can't wait for more

loved it

ellalive chapter 13 . 10/18/2007
This story is really cute. I'm anxious to see where Kyle and Sean's relationship is going. He seems like a genuinely sweet guy. Please update soon!

Elle8605 chapter 13 . 10/18/2007
Aww...Kylie's dad died. That's sad. This chapter didn't seem "choppy" to me. I enjoyed it. Sean and Kylie are together! WHOO! I was laughing so hard that the "Oh, did someone grow some balls while I wasn’t looking?" part. I can't wait to read about the trip to Boston and the dinner surprise. Loved both chapters as always!
kurstinhartsyou chapter 13 . 10/18/2007
Another good chapter.

Although, I feel bad for Kylie, because she thinks she has nothing to do.

I'd give a longer review but I gotta leave now.

I love the chapter.

I'm sure you'll update soon though.

OoohLookACat chapter 13 . 10/17/2007

but happy

good chapter

Miss-Simmone01 chapter 13 . 10/17/2007
I definately agree that a christmas story is like the best movie ever! i bought it on dvd as a christmas present to myself last year. Actually I just bought a replica of that leg lamp yesterday so I can give it to my dad as as gag gift this christmas.
OoohLookACat chapter 12 . 10/17/2007

finally together

unofficially though

but meh

and oh how sad about her dad

wwhat a horrible christmas that would be

if he died


can't wait for more though

kurstinhartsyou chapter 12 . 10/17/2007
I really do have to say my favorite part of this story.

And I quote you "I'm also sorry that Kylie is a little emo kid and cries a lot."


Oh man, you added the kissing part.

I think that made my day, and you didn't make it cheesy or anything.

You made it real.

There was so much emotion.

So I congratulate you on that.

I do have to say this chapter was one of your best by far.

In the way that you write.

I absolutely loved it, and I'm also glad that my reviews make you smile.

That's what I aim for.

You deserve good reviews for this story.

Anyways, update soon although you always do.


Great job.
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