Reviews for Out of Bounds
FreeDaChickens chapter 20 . 8/2/2008
Aw, their so cute together! :) You've done a great job with progressing their relationship slowly enough to be realistic while still making it interesting and not being too squicky for the student/teacher factor.

The only thing that seemed weird was, towards the end, when Mike says "Ah, it was ok. Had better." I know they were joking around, and Nick's reaction made sense, but it doesn't seem like something he'd say. He's empathetic enough to tell that Nick's at least slightly insecure, and it's bringing up the experience gap between the two. Just seemed out of character.

I'm really excited that you're bringing up some of the sub-plots now; I can't wait to see what else is going to be brought up in the upcoming chapters. I really like the fast updates and hope they keep coming!
HazeleyedHoney chapter 20 . 8/2/2008
Will the school really be that lenient if they found out about the relationship? I call "straights" breeders..even though I'm a breeder myself. lol
Cattails chapter 20 . 8/2/2008
Well, that was a very good smut scene, I think Also: about time! I was afraid they were gonna blow-up from the sexual tension. Ah, the pair of them are just too cute XD Hm, so he's masquerading as his brother, then? I sense drama in that! But at least it explains why he has all those books... O_O Does that rule actually exist outside of the story, with Sixth Form and young teachers? Cuz that'd be interesting! Anyway, looking forward to the next chapter, as always! XD My love for this story with never die!
Katmandu chapter 20 . 8/2/2008
For some reason the last paragraph doesn't seem to bode well. I think I see drama ahead. I'm kinda sad about that, though. I like them being all cute, and fluffy, and happy. Secrets suck.

Very, VERY hot chapter. They sizzle. Yummy.
fam chapter 20 . 8/2/2008
I have never read a lemon from the POV of the topper before so congratulations, you get the award :)

Really nothing to say about this chapter except it was fantastic. I've read my fair share of lemons and none were as good as this!

hm...I trust Mike but I think their's something fishy going on.
Mewenn chapter 20 . 8/2/2008
They must be real twin brothers if he can use his name like that. This doesn't smell good even though Mike seems to be a good guy. At least I want to believe he his.
Natasha5 chapter 20 . 8/2/2008
I'll admit straight off that I'm not a sex-scene sort of person - probably because I write and read slash and I'm not particularly interested in the male anatomy - but I think this was really well-written. Though I've been a bit cautious of Mike all along, this made me trust him a lot more. I didn't feel like he was the lying teacher anymore, but rather that he was just *Mike*.

Also, the awkwardness and the Britishness - spot on, as per usual.

I'm really liking these quick updates. I take weeks to knock out chapters nowadays.

narcissistic chapter 20 . 8/2/2008
ah i love this chapter. i mean it really shows how much they both love each other and how much mike seriosuly wants to keep this relationship.
JtheChosen1 chapter 20 . 8/2/2008
yay! they actually did it!
TRSNG chapter 20 . 8/2/2008
Only a hand, and I’d got one of them myself, but Jesus, his were magic hands.

Ahaha I am your biggest fan - you know this to be true, right? Mike's so sexy, that was all so *sexy*. You did good with the sexy OK?

On a future note - ah! I hope Mike's not heading for Bad Times with all this mystery...
hey chapter 20 . 8/2/2008

Come on. Sex scenes aren't rated T anymore. That's like, basic. :P
mandrake-o chapter 19 . 7/30/2008
I love that when you reference A Christmas Carol, what you actually mean is "A Muppet Christmas Carol". I used to watch that movie every Christmas Eve.

And good on Nick for getting Angel Boy in the face.

) Mandraco.
XxAmericanxBeautyxX chapter 19 . 7/29/2008
Great story. Loving it. Can't wait to read more. :)
Midnights Scream chapter 19 . 7/29/2008
oh no! I don't see Dobbs and Doug are the type to talk to school about it or anything though I think it'll probably get out. I want a happy ending though damn it so things should work out. great job!Can't wait for more.
Mewenn chapter 19 . 7/29/2008
Well, Doug and Dobbs seems to take it well. I just hope they are better at keeping secrets than I think they are (at least Doug doesn't look the type not to brag about what he knows).
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