Reviews for Out of Bounds
Curb Crasher chapter 16 . 7/15/2008
Aw. What an upbeat last sentence. And things are going so good, too. . . . Well, okay, not really. They sorta got worse, but they're a little better than the worse now. . . .
Curb Crasher chapter 15 . 7/15/2008
I was so afraid this chapter would be totally depressing. I kept rereading those first two paragraphs and not being able to read any farther. It was sorta like that time I was reading your 'With Intent'-that chapter when Adam danced with that guy, and then I skipped to the end. . . .

Anyways, I'm glad it's not.
Amindaya chapter 17 . 7/10/2008
Well, after falling out, I don't think he would be so energetic QUITE so quickly, even after getting sprayed with cold water. Usually the routine is cool down, drink water, maybe eat something, and rest.

I really like the shower fight! And the mom walking in, and her reaction. And, even better, Mike's reaction to her reaction.
Mewenn chapter 17 . 7/8/2008
oops, forgot to review last chapter. Anyway, the tension between those two doesn't seem to be going down. I say they will do a few more stupid things before it finnaly does too. And I will be there to enjoy the show of course :P
ren chapter 17 . 7/8/2008
*happydance* *melts* *puddlegigglesshrilly*
A Scarred Soul chapter 17 . 7/7/2008
Ah, the ending! The ending! Goodness, the ending! If you didn't catch that - The Ending! It was so cute and adorable and I can't wait to read more cause, the ending! I thought I was going to die I was smiling and giggling so much at Mike's line, "This is unavoidable; belive me, I've been trying." So yummy! I absolutely adore this story! And your writing, it's so awesome! You better become a pulished writer so I can buy books! Then, I'll either have to come on here to praise your work or send you fanmail . . . Oh goodness, you better stay on here, I've never sent fanmail to anyone . . . not sure if I could trust myself to carry that out successfully . . . . lol. But it's totally true, I'm being serious. Seriously!
Liviania chapter 17 . 7/7/2008
Maybe it's different in England, but in the US twit and twat are vulgar names for the genitals.

Nick's getting some action! But he needs more of the other kind of action, because he is seriously out of shape.

A Scarred Soul chapter 16 . 7/7/2008
Oh wow. OH WOW. Goodness, I'm so sad I had to wait so long to read this (stuck with no internet for two weeks just to house sit)! This was amazing! Now I have to go and read the next chapter - wonderful job!
Natasha5 chapter 17 . 7/7/2008
Perhaps it's a reaction to the Americanisation of stories on this website, but I absolutely love how BRITISH your writing is. Fan-bloody-tastic.
erasmuss chapter 17 . 7/7/2008
Oh how I do love you my dear.

This fic has provided me with nearly endless entertainment, and I find myslef giggling in a vary unmanly way at Nick's...antics and more often than not...idiocy. You do well in making him very english, and I am quite liking the gym teacher thing too.

All your characters are so fudging entertaining and I can picture all the crap that happens, location and all. Oh how I miss my mother England!

DAH! Feed me more, with small collectable teaspoon with the crown jewles on the end, and a bib featuring the unionjack.

Yeah- Feelin a litle homesick. This fic makes it all the better.

I almost forgot what a chav was...till you reminded me.

Cant wait for more me love.

In fact I do wait, but with a rabid fanboy apetite.

Not really, but you get the jist.


pplofthewrldeatcheese chapter 17 . 7/6/2008
NICE chapter... except, y'know the almost passing out of dehydration part, you just wanted to get them in the shower together. Glad to know that Nick isnt so young makes it less pervvy or w/e.

Cant wait for more! :P

P.s. i was re-reading Technicolor Something and I am now officially in love with that fic

Zebbie Pure Awesome!
Midnights Scream chapter 17 . 7/6/2008
:) sheer awesomeness I must say. You're amazing and I loved the chapter obviously. Mike is awsome. I love his character. All around this story just makes me happy
AnnaG.Luv chapter 17 . 7/6/2008
so good.
CakeForEveryone chapter 17 . 7/6/2008

No you are on a huge update roll! How can you tease your readers like this.

Awesome chapter, Nick finally really gets it on. The shower scene was steamy and very tension filled! Which was amazing!
FreeDaChickens chapter 17 . 7/6/2008
Wow. Um, that's about all I can say...

Before this story (more specifically, this chapter), I really didn't like teacher/student romance. It's safe to say that I've changed my views a bit with this. :) I really like the gradual characterization progression; their emotions and actions are pretty believable for the situation. I also really like all the subplots, but sometimes it feels like you forget about one or two - or just relegate them to the background for a little too long. Any way, I can't wait to see the next chapter of this . . . hopefully it will be just as good (and just as hot! XD) as this one was.
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