Reviews for Out of Bounds
Vengeful Black Dreamz chapter 12 . 5/15/2008

Brilliant chapter!
Ty Taco chapter 12 . 5/15/2008



Does he mean wrong...or TOTALLY RIGHT!


I fudging love this chapter.

And I hate you for making me start using the word fudging instead of fucking.

But oh well.

I LOVE this story.

I LOVE these characters.

I LOVE this Mr. Roberts...I mean Mike plotline.


Feel The Waltz chapter 12 . 5/15/2008
Ahahahaha, this chapter didn't half make me laugh. Spesh that bit about the chavvy trainers. Update vair quickly please as i am eager to see what happens next :D
Mewenn chapter 12 . 5/15/2008
It can only go wrong if they can get home. But seeing as things are, by that time Mr Robert-call-me-Mike will either have sobered a little or fallen in a coma… or Nick's head will have exploded.
Pundit chapter 12 . 5/14/2008
Wow, subtlety's not Drunk Mike's thing, huh? That was hot though (in a dirty way that I don't really like admitting). I wonder why he got plastered (and dressed up). Maybe he was sacked? There better be some more action in the next chapter. It will kill me if Mike passes out before anything more substantial can happen.

Love it! Update soon!
Kenya Bloodstone chapter 11 . 5/14/2008
OMFG this chapter was brilliant. I love this story. I am going to read the next chapter probably in the morning though seeing as it is already after 1 am my time. much love and hugs to you kudos
Cattails chapter 12 . 5/14/2008
Ee, I was so excited to see this updated so soon! Oh my! You weren't kidding! So, uh, what got Mike so wasted? I'm gonna take a stab and say it was because of his crushing on Nick. Which is totally cute XD Heh. Oh, Dougie...that poor kid. Ah, things are getting crazy! Hm, a glossary, eh? I think the only thing right now I don't understand is how the Years in school Canada, we have Grades 1-12, then uni (and in Grade 12 you're 17-18). How is it set up there?

Anyway, looking forward to the next chapter! I'm figuring it's going to be mad crazy and exciting! XD
CakeForEveryone chapter 12 . 5/14/2008
Much better! You totally made up for the last chapter!

Tsk what is Mr. Mike doing to "poor helpless defenseless" nick? I adore this chapter and I cannr wait to see where this goes!
Curb Crasher chapter 12 . 5/14/2008
. . . Yeah, I agree with that last line. But it's wrong in a right kind-of way!

Nah, I'm okay with the UK words. I actually use 'wonky' as part of my everyday conversations, just because it's so easy to use, but I'm trying to change that as everybody thinks it's weird.

Not really 'clunky'. People calling others is always abrupt. I mean, unless they say they're going to call. Who does?

So fast an update! Thanks. Terrible cliffy, but thanks.
gummybaby chapter 12 . 5/14/2008
I so happy you went update happy! Mike is so going to regret having done that the next

And here's my word list : D





FreeDaChickens chapter 12 . 5/14/2008
Oh man, I love this story! The characters are so well done, the plot's interesting, and the slang is hilarious (I'm American, so it's all different on this side of the pond :D). I normally don't go for student-teacher relationships, but you write it well enough that it doesn't even matter.

I'm really curious to see what happens next (along with all the other plot points you've been leaving hanging - Treacle, why he's pretending to be a gym teacher, what's happening with Charles and Dougie, etc. So update soon, 'kay? (By the way, I really loved the fast update on this one, even if this chapter was kind of short. Can't wait for the next chapter!

Ty Taco chapter 11 . 5/14/2008


Call me a creep.

But I think "Mike" and Nick should TOTALLY get together!

That would be fudging amazing!


CakeForEveryone chapter 11 . 5/13/2008
What a tease! I want more!
A Scarred Soul chapter 11 . 5/13/2008
Ek, so yayz, just for that last scene! Hehehehehehehe Hmm, very strange - Charles' confusion and calling and such. I wonder, why is suddenly so interested again? And why the confusion? I smell something fishy! Don't mind my craziness, it'll go away eventually . . . maybe. Anyway, I can't wait for more, yayz! -
Amindaya chapter 11 . 5/13/2008
Yes, I do like it. The reintroduction of Charles has major possibilities.
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