Reviews for The Strays
Liviania chapter 2 . 3/21/2008
You might want to add little dividers to mark POV switches - I can figure it out, but it makes it a touch harder to read.

Aw, I like James. I adore happy characters (mainly because I'm a happy person.) However, they aren't written about much since stories need conflict. I don't mean characters aren't often happy in novels, they just aren't that baseline happy personality that's pretty content even when under stress. If that makes any sense.

Er, mistakes . . . all I noticed was you called James a girl-pretty boy somewhere. I assumed you meant girly-pretty boy. I didn't catch any others, but I read pretty fast.

Livi
Ty Taco chapter 2 . 3/18/2008
amazing story.

I love how long the chapters are.

And the different character POV's are great.

James mind is like my little bro's.

it's hilarious.

anyways,

love your story.

keep up the good work.

xoxoxo,

Ty
Eleifa chapter 1 . 3/15/2008
Man I hope you finish this someday. You're a good writer and this could turn out really great.
Liviania chapter 1 . 11/19/2007
Excellent beginning - I also like the small touches like Gene's power hurting.

Also, he tried his sister's yeast cream? That's utterly hilarious. _ Ah, I can't wait for the explanation. You've created an excellent atmosphere.

Livi
magalina chapter 1 . 10/10/2007
Waah, cool start! XD Im liking these characters, I wanna read more, hope you keep writing!
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