All I could think of was; "NO..."

as I read the last few paragraphs.

holy crap, this is THE most underreviewed story on fictionpress. seriously, i mean that.

this chapter was amazing! i can't tell you how pleasantly surprised and excited i was to see an update, and it was absolutely worth the wait. gosh, i love everything about this story, from the premise to the perfect chemistry between drew and kelsey, and the obvious intensity between brian and kelsey as well. i've always been a drew fan but i was actually confused midway through the chapter, considering the brian/kelsey ship instead! (this was fleeting, i adore drew, but normally i am pretty unmovable when it comes to love triangles)

the end of the chapter, however, definitely melted MY heart when andrew FINALLY opened up about his feelings. sawoon. of course it was in the worst possible context, but damn it, they better fix things.

great job, please update again soon! keep up the amazing work.

this was such a sad chapter!

i could almost feel kelsey's loneliness and desperation for something at the end of this.

i loved it though, and i can't wait till you update again!

So, it looks like you haven't updated in a while...YOU should do that. please.

You promised an update by the end of July. Are you alright? We all are waiting patiently. Please update soon. You're killing me. Must read more soon.

I absolutely LOVE DoYO! Though the plot is sometimes kind of murky (in a confusing-but-good kind of way). You've done a great job of getting readers to hate Brian, but feel sort of compelled towards him anyway. I (used to) flat-out hate Tara, but even her backstory makes her more understandable. I still don't like Cassandra, and I dislike Cedric even more. I get that Cassandra is his twin, and he loves her, but Kelsey is his sister too. So it was confusing to see him start being more brotherly to Kelsey as well. As for the Andrew and Kelsey dynamic-it still is really weird. (Though I think you deserve the SKOW for best kiss!) She was mad at him because he wouldn't talk to her at school other than to annoy her, but she starts liking him anway, and then she starts LOVING him. It's a whirlwind that left me confused. Even though I understood the amazingness that is Andrew, he's kind of a jerk. Who Kelsey suddenly likes That change left me feeling kind of breathless. (Or was it just those kisses?) Overall, I think the story is amazing! And that you should update really, really soon! :)

Please update soon! I have really enjoyed reading this story and can't wait to read what happens next! Best of luck! :-)

Oh! I love this story... poor Brian! Can't wait till the next update ]

I really love this story! I think it's one of the best in fictionpress :)

Can't wait for the next chapter, please update soon!

First - I love, love, love this story. I love the characters, who are actually all interesting, which is a rare thing in Fpdotcom stories. My favourite, characterization-wise, is probably Cassandra, because I can't figure her out. (And that is a good thing.)

I do have one tiny nitpicking thing, too: when Andrew spoke to Kelsey in French, he used the formal vous-form. Was that intentional? It seemed to me that using tu would have made more sense, since it wasn't exactly a formal speech.

And I'll go read right on, because I sense something big is coming up in the story soon and I can't wait...

Oh and could you please fix your pictures that you have on your website... of the characters! I keep clicking on them but none of the links are workingg. I want to see your vision of the characterss compared to mine haha. )

You're story has been one of the most amazing stories I have ever read in my entire life on fanfiction. It's absolutely mindblowing; hell that wouldn't even be enough of a synonym to describe it! You are one talented author gifted with the talent of writing incredible stories. I wouldn't be surprised to hear your name on the next best novel lol! Your characters are all genuine and unique. I have fallen head over heels for Andrew because he sure is one hell of a guy. I love how the two of them balance one another; even if it means being mean to each other. SOMETIMES, it is taken a bit too far but hey, we all get carried away lol. I definitely loved the plot, I love how you made it so that the exact opposite of what was suppose to happen, happen. It definitely twisted the story and added a more ideal thought of the whole thing over all. I have a few questions: What did Frank say to upset Andrew so much that night? I'm still soo confused by that and I realy want to know lol. It's been bugging me. And about the whole conflict over all, I'm still a little bit confused. So Cassie pretty much used the two of them in adavantage? YOU HAVE TO UPDATE SON, I need answers quikcly. lol! Pleasee update soon, and don't let anything happen between her and Andrew. Their relationship is what keeps the whole story stable, if it changes the whole story will be ruined lol! I LOVE IT, and I'm so proud of your writing. It really is incredible.

please please please update soon!

i absolutely LOVE the story :D

This is amazing! Love Andrew's character so much. Kelsey and him are perfect, like strawberries and chocolate. Update soon! Can't wait for more romance!

ooh, the truth comes out.

good chapter. the grammar is bugging me a lot less now, and this entire chapter was...captivating. you're amazing, really. update soon.