so brian is not going to try to kiss her and then andrew shows up?

Aw man, that's a hit right there. It's all perfectly constructed and I'm sitting here completely stunned. Awesome job, I'm intrigued as what's going to happen next. This is pretty mind-blowing. :)

So, it's taken me practically a night and an hour this morning to read up to this chapter. :) I really like this story and I think the suspense is actually, well, suspenseful and I love it. The tension between characters is very much real and they are developing wonderfully. I have also noticed that the plan with Brian is taking itself into action since he's still weirdly into her, haha. But, I guess some people can't see that. :) Great story, I still have a couple more chapters to be all up-to-date.

how cute! i cant wait to read the next chapter!

I'm glad you've finally updated!

This was a great chapter... I'm glad we know what really happened with Cassandra, Tara, and Brian. Good twist. :]

really confusing sometimes but only makes me want to read more to understand what's going on. sandy's story and explanation was totally unsuspected and i liked how it made sense. great story and hope you update soon!

I LUVV YOUR STORY!

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pls pls pls update

thanks for updating 2day

luv ya

So I'm just gonna say it.

FINALLY! hEHE.

*Waits patiently for the next chapter*

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YAY! and update! SERSIOUSLY YAY!

please please write more i so very much enjoyed reading that, and all my questions are answered, well most of them... now i just want LOVE :P tbc has never sounded so good :O NO, IM NOT A SUCK UP! hehe although if that helps than take it all!

I'm so happy your back. Thank you.

Your characters are awesome! I positively love Kelsey! Andrew is still as confusing as ever. Yes, Brian is not the bad guy, just hurt and upset. The confrontation between Brian and Kelsey is going to be dramatic! What's with Mora and Jessica? I was sorta disappointed with their attitude.

I really found your explanation about Cassandra's relationships to be insightful and interesting - very believeable.

Can't wait for the next chapter!

Happy Valentine's Day!

yay! the perfect valentine's treat! i'm glad you've updated and i'm glad you've explained a lot of stuff. this is still one of my favorite stories, and i can't wait to keep reading more!

Good chapter, that really fleshed out a lot of things happening. I can't wait to read more.

thank goodness you're alive1

Great story, keep up the good work

Update pwease?

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