Oh my gosh. Oh my gosh. OH MY GOSH. Secrets revealed! Gah, that's sweet. (:

Okay, update! I can't wait till you finish this story...

Have fun in Costa Rica! I'm sure you will have a blast.

Anyhow, I was absolutely stunned to hear about Tara's mom. WOW! I have no idea where you're going with this story and I can't wait to get to the end!

Something I caught...

“No.” He had said it was a resolute expression on his face..

- Should it be... "He had said it WITH a re..."?

That was a good chapter! I love the way you build up your characters and I really cannot wait for the next chapter! Definately looking forward to it ;)

that was absolutely amazing, I mean I really did not see any of that coming. You took me by surprise and that does not happen often, so absolutely great job.

Well hell I didn't see that one coming. Is Sandy really that sinister and manipulative? Gosh. And I need more Andrew/Kels

so... i was rereading this, because i missed some chapters due to exams, and i have a few things to add to my last review.

1- liked the bit with cedric kelsey. he was pretty much the last person i expected to comfort her after brian's speech!

2- i really enjoyed the latest chapter ("the wrong girl"), but in retrospect i do hope you go back and make some changes. mainly because a good chunk of the middle seemed like a defense of kelsey's character... it read like a laundry list of reasons why she's just as 3-dimensonal as the other characters. i think there was too much "telling" to go with the "showing." does that make sense? for example, when kelsey noted that just a little while before, she and andrew would've made something as simple as a small question into a huge argument, so clearly they've grown a lot. you shouldn't have to say this explicitly - readers who have followed the story arc will pick up on it! and if they don't, maybe it didn't stick out to them or it was a very subtle change, which isn't a bad thing.

3- lastly, you're going to costa rica, not chile! i don't even know why i thought chile. so i amend my last review - hope you have a fabulous time in COSTA RICA! :)

God, I really hate Sandy. So, is she a lesbian? Are she and Tara in a relationship? That would really suck for Robert that she used him like that.

Still loving Drew and Kelsey. I'm really glad she was truthful with him and that he eventually was truthful with her. Slowly, he's letting down his guard and letting her in.

Enjoy your trip to Costa Rica.

Well have fun in Costa Rica! The story is great, but I'm a little confused about Sandy being there and everything she was saying. If you could clarify it, that would be amazing.

The story is great!

This story is so full of unexpected twists and turns. You have written this so amazingly well it is supprising everything that is happening. really cannot wait for the next chapter. This is really to extreme for my word vocabulary.

Mercury.

Intense!

love, love the twist. and andrew/kelsey. good job incorporating how they've "grown" as characters. some of kelsey's realizations seemed a little sudden, but guess that was to be expected after brian's speech. in some ways i think it was the kick in the ss she needed.

so... is sandy lesbian? (or bi)... are/were she and tara in a relationship? definitely not sure whether i interpreted the last section correctly, but really well done. it's hard to find unpredictable on fp these days! )

hope chile is wonderful.

wow

well that was intense to the max

im glad that Kelsey and Drew have sort of got it together though

but your plot is so.. so.. BAM completely full on which i LOVE mainly because its so emotional. every circumstance depends on the characters thoughts and feelings.

update soon soon soon please?

I'm still a bit confused as to what is going on, but it seems like you're going to clear it up. Um, are Tara and Sandy in love? That's what it seems like from... everything.

wow, good chapter. Have fun and update soon when ya get back :)

Faith

Oh my GOD. Well first of all, I didn't even THINK about this whole abortion thing. And then POP! It's her MOM who gets an abortion. Like HOLYY TWIST. This whole story has got my mind all twisted, and I feel the exact same way as Kelsey is feeling right now. Like this whole highschool secrets and lies and everything behind the scenes, it's so ... amazingly great.

I look forward to your next update.

-dmn.