The way he Brain said that he was really liking her, I just felt really bad that she was doing those things to him-and I even felt sympathy for him. After he stated that he wanted to hurt Sandy and use her and Kelsey, that's when I decided that he was an asshole and needed to be punched in the face (which Kelsey did do).

I knew something was going to happen with the "Plan," I'm just glad that she didn't spill her guts out.

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I really enjoy Andrew/Kelsey. I'm glad that I didn't look up the French phrase, because that was a great scene.

What I'm really interested in is what the hell is up with Sandy? From what Brian was saying it seems that she had her own agenda and something major must have gone down at the dance while we were with Brian and Kelsey. I really hope she got what was coming to her, because I cannot stand Sandy.

Update soon.

This chapter was really fantastic. It really was. It was so emotional and really gripped the reader. I loved the new dynamic with Brian. It just shows how you never really know people. I'm really curious now about Cassandra's part in all of this. If the whole bet thing was her idea than it changes the story pretty drastically and Kelsey's part in it. I have to say, I really liked Brian in this chapter. For the first time, he had a tortured hero kind of thing about him. I kind of wanted her to keep kissing him, even though she belongs with Andrew. I was a little confused at the end though. I wasn't expecting her to get so upset. The only real justification I came up with was that she was mad at herself for getting into the whole thing. The sibling comforting thing at the end was fantastic too. I really think this was the best chapter you've written so far.

Hmm... Great chapter.. it's been a while since I read your story so it was a bit confusing trying to piece all the characters together without reading a couple chapters back. Unfortunately I didn't have time for that but I was able to figure out who was who by the end. Love this and can't wait for your next installment! :) I'm totally intrigued as to how this story will go... no idea.. this is AWESOME!

Wow. This was a GOOD chapter. I really hate how Kelsey gets jealous all the time...and doesn't hide it. But I loved how Brian went all 'crazy' about her.

Perfect.

x.

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this chapter was really well written although there was heaps of tension and then resolution present.

i cant wait to see how it develops from here so update soon i hope?

best bday gift ever! thanks! lol

the andrew scene where he translated made me really happy and did the brian kiss. it sucks that he is a bad guy but im inda glad tara and brian were planning to bring cassie down..hopefully they did? and thats why she was crying...

i wish kelsey went to drew's party or he found her but i guess that would have been to easy.

alrite, this chapter was of course written incredibly like all the others...

but i'm confused about brian

and the whole passionate kiss thing...? does that mean she likes him? cause she likes andrew doesnt she?

and tara and cassandra! what did they do :S

ah!

update soon!

Are you discontinuing thins story? I hope not cause it is awesome!

I like the love/hate relationship between Andrew and Kelsey. That kiss was very sweet. :) Now that they're moving forward, it seems like there are a lot of obstacles in their way: Brian, the Homecoming Dance, Sandy . . . . Speaking of Sandy and Brian, I don't quite know what's going on there it seems like you've replaced Sandy as the villain and Brian as the victim in this piece. I think Sandy probably did do the video with Brian and Tara (or at least Tara) because she told Kelsey she had evidence against Sandy. There's just a lot going on here and I look forward to seeing how it concludes.

Thank you. This story has totally made my week. I didn't notice any spelling errors throughout the whole story, so that was good. I kind of want to be able to relate to Tara a little though. I don't mean you should make her less evil, just more of a human-evil someone who has a reason for their actions, but not an excuse.

Anyway, your story has a great plot line, the characters all have personalities, and your writing style is unique. This, in my opinion is just as good if not better than most of the books I've checked out from the library, which IS saying something, cuz I do have good taste.

that wasa smokin kiss. but plz update already!

you have me up at 5:07am after reading your complete story in no joke, one go.

so if you dont update soon i will have to take drastic measures such as re-reading it all again for about 7 hours!

and in answer to your question i believe that character development was needed anyway without a strict plot to create a better understanding of their decisions apparent in the last few chapters. plus it was also very interesting anyway so i dont know who would have stopped reading! but the slowness was also helpful in conveying Kelsey's inner confusion in lust, or love, or whatever she feels so well done. althoguh i hope this feeling is explored later in a conversation between Drew and her.

OH. MY. GOD.

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This story is actually amazing!

I took me 3 days to read, and I loved every moment of it!

I'm in drama class at school, and right now were learning to do playrighting and how to make plots and conflict interesting, and how to set them up to make your story flow...

I have to say that everything my teacher has been trying to dril into my head for the last 2 weeks was basically summed up in this story so far!

It's so gripping and suspenseful and I always find myself sitting on the edge of my seat wondering what is going to happen next!

I read the last bit on your authors note... as much as the suspense really does kill me, it adds so much structure to the story! I'm loving it!

Your characters are so complex and realistic I feel that at any given time I could actually be sitting in a room with them hearing the conversations and the tones of their voices.

It's pretty safe to say I want you to update as soon as is humanly posible!(the suspense REALLY is eating away at me!)

-Taurusgirl7.

OH MY FETCHIN HECK!

first off I wanted to apologize for not reviewing sooner. My life is pretty hextic. I just read chapters 19-25 today.

I simply want to say that I LOVE THIS STORY SO MUCH!

My fiance came over and couldnt understand why I like silly romances. I've convinced him of this story's greatness!

Thank you again,

AND I CANT - REALLY CANT WAIT FOR MORE!