Wow... i just stumbled on this story and i love the way you wrote it and i also loved the way it's progressing. i'm probably saying love to much but i also love Andrew's character. The chemistry at the end of this chapter was so good that i just had to review too tell you just how awesome a wrighter you are, this has got to be one of my favorite stories so far. You were saying how people thought you were avoiding the plot or something and i agree with them but i think it's going so well with the story that it actually complements it. i just really hope you don't boot Brian off atamatically because i think that she should continue on with the plan just to make Cassandra mad (sorry but i really don't like her character)but still end up with Andrew. I also liked cedrics role in this chapter. can't wait till you update soon with another awesome chapter.

Oh man, I just found this story and have to say that it is completely amazing. Kelsey and Andrew kill me. I'm so glad that they're making progress in their relationship. The positiveness of their relationship makes up for the fact that you're not concentrating on her revenge nearly as much. Though, I don't believe you've completely dropped it - just moved it to the back burner. I have a pretty big feeling that the dance is going to be a big event in terms of relationships and revenge.

Update soon :)

Your story is progressing well. Kelsey doesn't have to do much, Brian is interested enough. I really hope she doesn't go thru with the plan.

Andrew & Kelsey are the HOTTEST COUPLE! The chemistry is awesome. Their relationship is refreshing.

Robert's character development in this chapter was great! He seemed to perfect before. The flirting between Robert & Kelsey was cute. Andrew's reaction was cute.

Mora and Jessica are true friends. Alot of great character development this chapter. Really appreciated the scene between Cedric and Kelsey.

The bad influence comment was insightful. The mystery of what happened between Cassandra & Brian is killing me.

Suspense? You bet and I love it! Your story is close to being perfect, in my opinion.

For me, the best test for a story is how anxious I am for the story to continue. I can't wait for the next chapter. Also I find myself thinking about the possible story line.

Excellent, as always. Hope you update soon. LOVE IT. Thanks for sharing, Jool

WOW... I Loved this chapter. The kiss was one of the best kiss scenes I have read... it was very real and described it as perfectly as possible. Their tension is fantastic and the chemistry is awesome

that was really awesome, i loved it so much. I really cant wait till you updaet, it made me want to sqeaul with excitement lol. great chapter.

I love the Kelsey and Andrew bits so cute,i love how this story is so unpredictable i even started to doubt that Andrew liked story, can't wait for you to update.

PLEASE DON'T LET THEM BREAK THEIR HEARTS BY HAVING HER DECIDE TO... SEDUCE BRIAN AGAIN WHEN THE TWO OF THEM HAVE FINALLY GOTTEN TO THIS POINT. _ That would drive me crazy... xD After 25 chapters of tension... ah!

hey I really like this story and my personal favorite part is the interaction between Andrew and Kelsey and hope they end up together...I also think you are not abandoning the main plot...So I hope you have a good week!

...FINALLY. D

I've been waiting for the chapter where they finally kiss.

Hurrah you made my day.

:)finally. please update soon

I thought that you did a nice job on this chapter, especially the beginning scene with Cedric. I liked how he complimented her-well at least he tried to. I'm also really happy that her and Andrew are not together but are liking each other and they both know it.

To be quite honest, I sort-of thought that she wasn't going through with her plans, but then I remembered how Brian was making the moves on her and not the other way around. Although I felt that way, I don't anymore. Besides, she's a bit more busy with Andrew than she is with Brian and her plan. I just hope that this doesn't come back and blow up in her face. It would be best if she just quite now, but I'm not you and then the story would be a lot shorter.

Post More Soon!

when i first joined fictionpress, i read the story the matchmaker and it was like, my fav. story. now i think its got competition! i was kinda thinking about thhe whole story plot 2. there wasnt a whole lot going on, but i guess if thats the way u planned it, i'll wait to see what happens.

still cant wait for the definition of those words in french. i LOVED this chapter. no, loved is an insult, but i dont know any other better words. i LOVED LOVED LOVED LOVED LOVED LOVED this chapter (hopefully thats good enough).

brian wasnt in the story much, and i hope that sort of changes. i never knew that andrew liked kelz, but now i do.

UPDATE SOON!

PLEASE! EVERY DAY THAT U DONT UPDATE, A KITTY DIES!

(evryone luvs kitties) SO UPDATE SOON!

lmfao

x

Wow, this chapter was fantastic. I loved it. The end was extremely romantic in that awkward and overwhelmed way. I can't wait for more. I'm really curious how the whole thing with Brian is going to end up. You can see she is really starting to doubt it. Now that she's with Andrew, will he even want her to go through with it? It will be really interesting to see what happens. Awesome job.

Finally! A true kiss. I was waiting for that forever... I was truly starting to question if Andrew actually liked her...

It was an AMAZING chapter. I can't wait to see more.

Wow...really awesome. I think Andrew and Kelsey are both starting to grow feelings for each other but with Brian and Kelsey. Kelsey need to act quick or else something is going to happen to her that she wouldn't want to happen. Well, I'll be looking forward to the next chapter. (: