Love this story. Alot of relationship explanation went on in this chapter. Kelsey sometimes seems really out of it and other times she's very insightful (like us all). Sad about losing touch with her friends' lives. One question: are you going to address her relationship with Cedric (several times you have referred to the fact he's not close or even cares about her)?

Also love the pics of your characters. Kelsey is so cute and Andrew is so hot! Are you going to add Cedric (suggestion: Paul Walker)? Thought Robert would be different.

Your story is by far my favorite story. I wish more people would review, because you deserve alot of praise. Thanks for sharing. NOW UPDATE SOON. (only kidding) Jool

Finally! It seems like they're getting somewhere... great chapter, though I did spot a couple of typos. So much happened! I'm feeling sad about Kelsey's friendhip with Mora and Jessica going down, seems like nothing can salvage it... and when Andrew held Elizabeth's hand, I was so very shocked! But yeah, am glad that there was major Kelsey-Andrew interaction :) Oh, and love the character pictures. Update soon!

Hello!

Wow, I just sat down today and read all twenty chapters :D It's really hard not to read all of it at once. Keeps you going, ya know? haha.

ANYWAYS, I just wanted to drop in and say that I really like this story.

It frustrates me how damn difficult Kelsey is! She always had a biting comment (which I admire her for) but doesn't always use them at the correct times...-.-

:D Oh well. Very interesting

Update soon!

loved the chapter. please update soon

ohmigosh! i'm loving it so far! keep up the good work :]

ohh and i don't know why but i like brian more than andrew xD

Really good. I kind of like Brian now...but I can't tell if he's lying. Anyway, please update! Thanks!

and Cassandra seems like a total BITCH.

man the suspense is killing me please update soon!

*Kelsey Rox!*

Eh. I still don't like him. He's such a weird character. It's like he doesn't even know he did wrong... or something. I dunno. His moral compass is kind of out of whack.

oh there was no andrew in this chappie :(

but anyway yaa great development on brian's character. i'm starting to like him now...cept i like andrew more (obviously)...

update soon!

Really trying to give Cassandra a chance, but what a Bitch! Brian seems very sweet and complex in this chapter. Could he secretly have been crushing on Kelsey? Great development of story and characters. I love the fact that Kelsey is open-minded enough to perhaps change her plan. Also liked the contrast shown between Andrew & Brian - very interesting. Anyway, any "stellar" chapter. LOVE THIS STORY! Update soon. Thanks. Jool

im sorry but

this is my opinion

not meaning to offend

you

but brian needs to

go die in a hole and have

his entrails picked apart

by vultures infected wit mad

cow disease...

but i rele luv the storyy

I'd like to take this time and say... I knew it!

There is an underlying plot behind this! Now if only I knew why Brian made the bet, I could say you could end this story, and my curiosity would be 'slightly' sated.

Now, I still dislike Brian, considering the choices he's made... However, it seems you've got a bit of a Mr. Darcy-ish thing from [i]Pride and Prejudice[/i] going on here, considering how Kelsey is prejudiced against Brian, but his character seems slightly good natured once one gets to know them.

Of course, I'm pretty sure you're just making Brian's character out to be some slightly decent guy, only to have him be this total jack- to people and Kelsey.

I'd be surprised.

Anyway, enough of my ranting on this story. Glad you updated. D

Wah? What's going on with Brian. He confuses me more than Andrew sometimes. Lol. *pouts* No andy/kels action in this one. Boo hoo. :P

omg im so confused. i feel like kelsey. i really hope cassie is the bad guy here. good luck on midterms and plz updatae soon.

It's going great so far! I'm really half afraid of reading further because I KNOW there's something huge ahead... but I just can't leave it halfway!

So yeah, the fact that you're making me want to read more must mean something good right?

p.s.: in the second last paragraph, I'm thinking that 'allude' should be 'elude'? Unless you know something I don't.