Now i am finally absolutely positively positive that she is going to end up with Andrew. If she ends up with Brian (which i know hat she is not!) then i WILL go crazy D That was a great chapter ending!

Wow...that was one emotional rollercoaster ride. There were parts that were a bit confusing, but I don't think it actually took away from the story because it seemed to reflect the confusion that Kelsey was feeling too, and the confusion was cleared up eventually anyway.

I loved how dramatic and intense this story was and the end of every chapter made me want to know what would happen next. I'm also glad that you didn't give a complete happily ever after ending where like Brian found someone else or Cassie and Kelsey made up or Cassie and Robert got back together because that would have been totally unrealistic. I'm just happy that Andrew and Kelsey eventually got their happy ending. D

Anyways, I really enjoyed the well-developed plot and characters, and I wanted to let you know that this is a wonderfully crafted piece of work. ]

I have finally decided that i think she will end up with Andrew, but i bet that by the end of the next chapter i will say that she will definitely end up with Brian. Lol Your story rocks!

wow now I'm wondering is Kelsey might actually end up with Andrew. i can usually tell who the girl/boy is going to end up with right at the beginning of the story!

i absolutely love this story! but im so confused...will Kelsey end up falling for Brian or Andrew? I think that shes going to fall for Brian and then Andrew will fall for Sandy. He even called her Cassie and helped her when she was crying. I thought that that was really sweet of him.

Oh god, what did she get herself into? And I am so glad my family isn't like that.

Poor Sandy!

Oh what happened?

Wow, I just spent HOURS reading this story. In some senses I really don't like most high school stories, so I wasn't into it at first, but then I did get into it... I don't know. It was so intriguing, you know? I mean, i wanted her to be with Andrew from the start but you were able to pull that tension along for way longer and for a while I actually thought she'd be with Brian in the end.

I guessed that there was something going on with Tara and Cassandra, but it was interesting to see how that resolved itself too. I think you did a great job hinting at things and also misleading us, haha.

So yeah, I seriously enjoyed myself. There were a few spelling or grammar errors, but nothing too distracting.

And I loved the way your main character transformed from beginning to end. Sometimes I wasn't sure if she was wimpy or strong, but that didn't seem to matter because she just felt REAL.

I think Kelsey is so stupid. I don't like her. She's going off about this plan, but she is suc to anyone that tries to help her. I understand that she doesn't like Andrew, but does every other sentence have to be the urge to maim him? Does she have to speak in depressing tones? She doesn't think through her thoughts. I mean, especially this chapter, does she really think she can get Brian to fall for her when she's such a bitch? She admitted that her reaction towards him was counter productive, but she could've backtracked or something. It's like she has this stick up her ass, and anyone who tries to show that they care ends up being burnt. I really don't like her. Her character doesn't seem developed, just slapped onto the screen for plot purposes. Andrew is alright; I like the insight into his life with the presence of his mom. Anyway, lol next chapter.

i absolutely love this story it is magnificent. you should really consider writing a sequel that would be great bcuz it just kinda ended in a good way of course but its one of those endings that u wish you knew what happens on later sine they are going to college and between her and more and her sister a robert. sequel would just add to this great story u have finished. consider it please haha

Hahaha, that was a funny ending :) I really liked this first chapter. It was easy-to-read and I like Kelsey a lot :D I'm excited to read more

OH. MY. GOD.

PROBABLY THE BEST ENDING EVER.

I LOVE THIS STORY. FAVORITED! Oh and BTW I got informed of this story from A Drop of Romeo, so thank you Juliet!

But I'm still curious about what happened to her and Mora though. :

STILL. LOVED IT. Sorry if I COMPLETELY flooded the review page. )) I just had something to say in about every chapter. :)

oh man I think I almost started dancing. I swear I really considered dancing when she finally told him she loved him. Ahh...love. LMAO.

FUCK.

MOTHER.

OHMYGOD.

WHAT?

NO!

NO.

OK.

NO MORE DANCING. AT ALL.

I find Kelsey and Cassandra's bickering HILARIOUS. :D