Reviews for Why Her ?
Imalefty chapter 1 . 11/9/2007
aw, this is sad. \

it's almost like lyrics to a song. :) i like how you rhyme in large chunks.

i guess the only thing... "helps here when she's..." - typo! :)

anyway, not much i can say about this. it's a nice, short poem.

-Lefty

ps: glad you liked my story. thanks for the support! :)