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| Little girl Big world chapter 1 . 9/25/2009
Short and simple. Beautifully written!
| Shadows in the Fire chapter 1 . 2/27/2008
O, I like it so much. It's amazingly well-written.
| dollface and her cancer chapter 1 . 11/28/2007
the simplicity of this is what makes it resounding, and terrifying.
| Miz E. Mak chapter 1 . 11/16/2007
powerful and short. you've got more than a knack for poetry. it's a gift. write on.
| simpleplan13 chapter 1 . 11/13/2007
I like this.. its short and sweet... well done
| Tytherpol chapter 1 . 11/6/2007
i love the choppiness of these words
and, though this is short, the picture painted is crazy
and almost too real.
i kept twisting the words, so i had to read this about five times
but it's good.
| Chidaruma Kamisori chapter 1 . 10/28/2007
I love it.
It makes me think of the boy I like.
| HauntedMisery chapter 1 . 10/21/2007
Short and beautiful ]
| no.peace.los.angeles chapter 1 . 10/19/2007
I love it. It's so very simple, but that's what makes it beautiful. "eyeliner boy-Man." What a gorgeous image. Keep writing! :)
| Indigo Carmine chapter 1 . 10/19/2007
God, why didn't I review this?
I love it. I know girls like this. I see them and my heart goes out to them but y'know, there's this feeling like... as much as I'd want to help them... I'd end up making them sad too and then it would be time for me to go.
| dress her up in fairytales chapter 1 . 10/16/2007
"this eyeliner boy-Man"
that line made me giggle ... and i don't know if that's a good thing or a bad thing.
| not sure yet chapter 1 . 10/16/2007
short and strong, mucho enjoyable, and definitely excellent
| Chidori Nadare chapter 1 . 10/14/2007
Short and very gorgeous. It's quite heavy at the last two lines, but overall it's quite light and fun to read.
| painting andromeda chapter 1 . 10/12/2007
This was fun to read. It proves that short pieces can carry emotion and meaning. Nice feat.
| i'll ask the stars above chapter 1 . 10/10/2007