Reviews for Pony |
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![]() ![]() Worth it, every time. |
![]() ![]() I always want to stick around for the next one. Always. |
![]() ![]() Ah, Pony. 3 |
![]() ![]() ![]() I loved it, thought it was very sweet with just the right amount of sadness. |
![]() ![]() Ohmag. This is... this is... my brain blew up because it was so cute. Gah. Holy crap. I loved this story! So cute! I can't believe that Colt had all that history. And that he transitioned from such a cold character to someone so... so adorable! Awwh! SO cute! Anyway, I don't have anything more productive to say, so... that's it. Thanks for the read, - A. |
![]() ![]() ![]() I think your fundamental theme as a writer might be phrased like this “Love amid the awkwardness.” I don’t simply mean social awkwardness, but rather a grander awkwardness; the awkwardness that comes from being two different human beings, incapable of complete union with another human being. So, here, we get as much of a sense of how the two characters might never truly know each other, and how much suffering they have gone through as a matter of course, as we do of their love and trust. I think this theme is even more apparent in other stories of yours. Your stories have led me to believe that awkwardness is one of the most erotic themes, in fact. The part of this story that affects me most is the scene where Pete criticizes Trey for being desperate enough to hook up with Colt. |
![]() ![]() Wonderful story, Trey and Colt were made for each other. |
![]() ![]() ![]() really cute and really realistic. charming. |
![]() ![]() Pony, tehee. At first it was odd and then it just kinda stuck haha! Lovely read, thank you so much for sharing! :D |
![]() ![]() ![]() Very cute. I love their interaction as they get to know each other better. |
![]() ![]() ![]() awesome story loved it i dont get why Colt hated him in the beginning though...kinda random |
![]() ![]() ![]() Hahah, they're so sweet xD I really enjoyed this story Thanks for writing! And don't mind me, I'm just gonna go ahead and snoop around your other stories x3 |
![]() ![]() ![]() This was a really sweet story! haha and that Q&A at the end was adorable :) |
![]() ![]() ![]() I LOVE the Character Interview Session! That ws the best thing ever! It made me laugh so hard and you stayed true to the characters. Well done. Very impressive. The story was very good, too. |
![]() ![]() ![]() Cute! They are such a lovable couple. lol. xD |