your absolutly amazing. marry me!

"On razor's edge we balance strong

The cutting line twix right and wrong"

Such a rewarding poem to read. Your language guides with a mystery and a fluidity that is simply irresistible. I look forward to reading more of your work.

Best regards

- Lethbridge

wow, so this was amazing! It's strange how you can be most inspired while sleeping, but I find that it often happens.

I honestly loved this poem, from the flow of it down to the words you used and the overall meaning and idea of the poem. Splendid job!

Wow, is truly all I can say. I love the comparisons you used:

Like water, so we are to fire

And happiness to violent ire.

Like life to death and death to life,

As blood to cut and cut to knife

If i could sum up all of this in one word, it would be Beautiful.

I think this piece is very, very good. It rhymes nicely and there is a tragic quality to it. I know this has been said a million-billion times, but awesome job.

~EI

i like it! can't wait to see wut you do with it! good concept and strong imagery :)

~KS

Very good. It flows really well. Good job.

~Jeannie-Redd