Reviews for Mental Breakdown
Luna Turner chapter 1 . 10/9/2007
Oh God. It's not fair! I want your writing! WAH! Just kidding.

Cheers! ~Kat
EternallyImperfect chapter 1 . 10/8/2007
I love they way you wrote this. It's confusing with a subtle touch of weird, but that fits the theme nicely.

It also has a soft, pleasant flow.

My opinion-It's a nice but strange poem. A fine piece of art. It's more prose than poetry, though.

Arafax chapter 1 . 10/8/2007
Interesting way to describe a mental breakdown. Very nice job on this. Well written and to the point.