|Reviews for A Flowerbed of Weeds|
| person is gone chapter 1 . 3/7/2008
Strange But I like it. I was wondering at first why the weed-killing came before the bee, but it made sense in the end... anyway, you say you're not very good with words but I like the simplicity with which you wrote it. I made it easy to read, relatable and believable.
And yeah, I agree with the ending not being strong enough... but I really can't think of an alternative O.o
Loved it anyway )
| The Storyteller's Daughter chapter 1 . 10/16/2007
This story is told from an interesting point of view and made me think in a different way. I really like the message you're trying to send out and I agree that human beings are slowly destroying nature and that it might not exist one day if we don't work to protect it.
| nuttx chapter 1 . 10/9/2007
'tanula, I love how you always take the perspective of something else. Like, not a person. )
I'm guessing you know who I am...?
Oh, and as for a beta-reader-ish thing... I'd be happy to work with 'muff and occasionally beta-read. Provided, of course, that I'm actually on the net.
| vague shadow chapter 1 . 10/8/2007
I liked this. It was different. _ Short, but different. Great job!
| xEmoMuffinx chapter 1 . 10/8/2007
Oh no! You took one of my edits the wrong way!
"Just like a dog was a man’s best friend, bees were best friends of flowers."
Although the sentence is now in the same tense, it's kind of different to the rest of the paragraph.
The ending is good.