|Reviews for Coliseum|
| Satan's Angelic Mistress chapter 4 . 12/3/2008
Hm. Was Braelyn ever pregnant? Because it was the only logical reasoning I could ever think of for her switching schools in Eiffel Tower, especially with that girl... Paris' random hook-up who was all like "Braelyn said Sebastian was really supportive."
Gabe is cool. [ You're right though, there was closure for Paris and Seb and they didn't really need another story.
| Satan's Angelic Mistress chapter 3 . 12/3/2008
Is Hannah inspired by Two and a Half Men's Rose? Because she certainly reminds me of her.
| Liviania chapter 4 . 7/20/2008
That's cool. No need to force something - I'd rather get a superior product when you're feeling it.
| persimmon chapter 4 . 7/8/2008
Oh cool! So I read this after reading the first chapter of Electric Feel, but hey whatever, this just leaves me with an even warmer happy glow glow feeling than before so...w00t and all that good stuff. And yay, there will be lots of Paris and Sebastian too! They'd actually be good for the Gabe story really, as I said before, it seems to be a far more serious piece, and a little Paris on the side would definitely provide a nice bit of comic relief.
Actually, reading this, I can totally understand your decision, and I agree with it too. Giving Paris and Sebastian more angst is really not cool, fiction is there for happy endings...and really, it would be kind of unpleasant to see them completely torn up a second time. Sniff. It was hard enough the first time round.
I do hope they resolve the whole Paris smoking pot thing...actually, that's probably just me, I'm kind of a substance free goody two-shoes like that...too sensible for my own good really and while I guess I'd never stop anyone else, I always feel terrible when people I care about are pouring shit into their bodies...rambling, sorry.
You rock my socks.
| rawr chapter 4 . 6/2/2008
You did end The Eiffel Tower wonderfully. At first I wondered why you were writing a sequel (I don't particularly like sequels even though it's always so sad when things end), but I didn't question it because I believe that you aren't a decent writer, you are an incredible one. Plus Seb and Paris are adorable. Anyway, I consider The Eiffel Tower to be one of the most outstanding slash stories ever written on fictionpress. Most of the people I know will agree that if they have read slash here on fictionpress then they have read your story. Good luck with Electric Feel. I'll be following closely. Love ya.
| I Am The Bunny Slayer chapter 4 . 6/2/2008
This is so crazy, cause I was JUST thinking about this story today. Kismet.
Thanks for the explanation, and I hope I enjoy Electric Feel as well!
| forbiddenstars chapter 3 . 5/21/2008
the sequel promises to be as good as if not better than eiffel! keep writing and updating!
ps. kinda curious. who's top and who's bottom between seba and paris? it sounds like its top-paris, but that seems so...idunno. isn't paris really skinny? laughs either way is ok, but i wish i could know for sure.
| Repmet chapter 3 . 4/18/2008
Well my dear, I'm dieing to know what happens. This is by far my favorite story on fanfiction...and one of the few I acutally keep up with!
Update soon please!
| amber chapter 3 . 2/10/2008
Eiffel Tower was a really good fic. It would be difficult to match it, but this fic seems to be coming along well.
Disliked the first chapter, but the other two made up for it.
I have one grouse though. I can't see why Seb & Paris are together. They don't seem to gel as well as they did in the earlier story. You need to work on this.
Keep writing. You do have a lot of talent & this story has potential.
| omfgwhatnow chapter 3 . 1/21/2008
Loving this story, hope you update soon! ;D
| sana chapter 3 . 1/8/2008
update soon please. waiting for the next installment.
umm,just visited the site to see if there were any new updates n glanced at the reviews. looks like there was a typo-i've mentioned Eiffel Tower as EF instead of ET. the thing is thats the way i've saved it on my hardrive- the name has stuck i guess. i'm probably liable to use it later too . sorry.
happy new year. hope u establish a great relationship with ur muses in 2008.
| magalina chapter 3 . 1/3/2008
Braelyn? :o AAh, cant wait for the next chapter!
| sana chapter 3 . 12/17/2007
first of all, thanx 4 starting the sequel. i loved the Eiffel Tower (EF)- u created such adorable characters - Paris being my favourite, of course. loved Seb too.
this is coming along well. i didn't like the 1st chapter much-was a bit stiff... but u picked up the flow from the 2nd chapter -
in the Eiffel Tower, no matter how superficial the interaction between Seb n Paris might have been, there was always an underlying thread of intimacy n affection - it was one of the things i loved about it - although Paris might be acting like a jerk or Seb as a idiot it was obvious that the boys really cared about each other. that's missing a little in the 1st chapter here - u can't understand why they are together there.
but like i said it starts to pick up in the 2nd chapter - Paris' POV was in keeping with the tone of EF. well done.
I think Seb's 2nd POV is much better - but I think u can do better - all the best.
a bit more stuff about how they interact together, thrown in with a bit of Paris' snarky sense of humour & childishness would make it perfect.
the interaction between Paris & Hero was quite well done too. But a bit more about the interaction between the Brien family & SP would be nice.
Hey, how about a one-shot where SP tell Paris' parents about them. it would be interesting.
will their school friends also make an appearance later in the story? - i hope so - u had created good characters- i hope u don't let them go...
its good to have the boys SP back. pl continue the good work.
| dedprofile chapter 3 . 12/12/2007
a ha! I'm definitely excited to see why she called him. Well, you know most of us have our own guesses from the last series ;)
| magalina chapter 2 . 12/10/2007
It was nice to see Hero again :P And I still adore paris.