Reviews for the murders of angels
half-sketched.staccatos chapter 1 . 10/12/2007
konnichi wa

"inked into our skin; black and blue. like bruises." - Great imagery in this one.

"we killed them all... because they weren't ever supposed to stop singing." - I loved the forlorn words and the matter-of-fact way you state them. :)

Zaijen

-Shan-
burning in effigy chapter 1 . 10/11/2007
simple.. but i really like this poem :)

especially the last few lines when you mention angels

"seaweed in our teeth and/nautical stars inked/into our skin;/black and blue./like bruises."- love that

excellent poem!

(thanks for the review)