Reviews for When I'm dead
AnneGirl15 chapter 1 . 2/19/2008
When you are dead you will either go to heaven or hell, thats the truth. Please don't let yourself go to hell. It's a terrible place. God loves you and he wants you. Except the gift of salvation...it will change your life, trust me! Anne P.S. Thanks for the review!
Twilight Starr chapter 1 . 10/22/2007
Great poem.

Twilight Starr
AuraBorealis chapter 1 . 10/18/2007
good work
lyl chapter 1 . 10/10/2007
I liked it, it had a nice concept to it- "I renounced to be the fairy tale's princess." But you could probably have used "refused" or another word instead of "renounced" because it can't be used with "to be", I don't think.

And where you say "with no doubt, that someone would be you always you", you need a comma between "you" and "always you".

Other than that, I really think your grammer is improving. Great job! :)
Slightly Bruised And Broken chapter 1 . 10/9/2007
this is freaking awesome! i love it. i could picture a classic romance movie playing in my head. i think you should make it into a story and see what happens.