Reviews for Pawn Takes King
Vexed and Tired chapter 1 . 10/10/2007
You're really good at this whole song-writing business, aren't you? I wouldn't be surprised if you did music for them all and everything.

The thing which I like about your work is that it's just genuinely better than everybody else's. So much imagery, and no pathetic rhyme schemes to constrain it.

How many people have I met who think poetry is abot rhyming? Too many, that's what. I'm not saying that rhyme is a bad thing by the way, but most people are really bad at using them and so it's incredibly pleasing.

Keep up the great work.
Twilight Starr chapter 1 . 10/9/2007
Good poem.

Good luck with poetry and life.

Have a wonderful day.

~Twilight Starr~