This is an incredible story :-) It almost makes me wanna cry :-)

:))))))))))) (squeal) Nice one!

dis is GOOD nicely written maybe little LONG length wise otherwise its good

ok seriously u got me goin teary eyed! I loved it!

BRILLIANT! i loved this one

:) i like it and i think it's really sweet and cute...

Keep writing !

Awesome! :)

Not a lot of guys would keep their word... especially when it's a promise to catch you when you fall. Few manage to really do as they promise. *somewhat sad smile*

AW super sweet, good job

Aww this was so sweet, it really touched me...Yes we may seem fine on the outside and try not to be sappy romantics, But i think every girl waits for that special someone to sweep her of her feet! :P Good story, Keep writing more stories :DD

I feel that this story is kinda abstract compared to those that I usually read on FP. Nevertheless, it is very, very enjoyable, and the chemistry between the characters is great.

Well done, again! Pure emotional amazingness and more metephorical soul-speeches! D

OMGOMGOMGOMG! (that was me venting my exasperation - or not really exasperation, kind of, not really...) Uh. You must be so excited! Year 12! LUCKY!

Ok omfg! That was absolutely WOW! I mean, I totally wish it was me, so yeh.

Did you win?

You should have of course.

If I was the judges, you would have won.

xx

bella.

aw

Aw, so cute! :D I LOVE this! (favingg!)

i like this. it's not obnoxiously cheesy and fluffy (like all of my stories, heheh)but it's still very sweet.

it's cute. i love it.