Reviews for Born to be Reborn thoughts
AK the Twilight chapter 1 . 6/13/2008
I liked how this story was told. The prose worked well in its format and the story itself was pretty fantastic and interesting because of it. You definitely need to pay attention to grammar mistakes, and while I'm not a big fan of telling people this, don't forget the punctuation, especially in the italicized part near the end. It made it a bit difficult to follow.

I also didn't feel a real connection between the girl and her wing. It seemed to be resolved too quickly. It it, however, very easy to see her relationship with the man. It's quite heartfelt, like a father-figure. This was a cool read, though you need to pay attention to punctuation. Overall, great job.
Twilight Starr chapter 1 . 10/22/2007
Cute poem. It was so sweet.

Twilight Starr
AuraBorealis chapter 1 . 10/18/2007
good work
Surfing Dog chapter 1 . 10/10/2007
Different. Very different, but in a good way of course. It's unique, refreshing, and I enjoyed it. Keep writing dear writer.