ok, once again, amazing! actually, for this one, I have no critiques...GREAT JOB!

it's gripping, I'd like to read more chapters..

"Then get a sniff of her blood…Then dare to try a taste" this part makes mystery.. to be honest I thought about vampires but it's not the fact, it's an interesting story.

Very interesting and unique concept. The fight scene kind of reminded me of V for vendetta though. One nitpick though, the word "badness" doesnt seem like a good describing word to use. Other than that it was good. Keep up the good work.