Reviews for The World in Play: Chapter 5: Let the Thief Beware
Lynn K. Hollander chapter 2 . 2/10/2013
Errata: for Mt Wilson, read Mt Hamilton, throughout.
Author's Note chapter 1 . 9/23/2010
Antonio Prohias drew/wrote _Spy vs Spy_ for MAD magazine(1961-1987).
marceline the vampire queen chapter 1 . 7/9/2010
Nice story and good characterisation, but the chapter is way too long, and may lead people to lose interest. Either cut or divide into sections. Long chapters are fine in novels but can be irritating on websites. Other than that I like it.
Nakehaton chapter 1 . 6/15/2010
the story is fine... but it really isn't worth this... i can't stand the fact that you have broken the fictionpress rules. fictionpress is a wonderful place to post your stories to get feedback and reviews... but if you cannot follow the simple rules, then do you really deserve to be part of the community? as well as that you are a hypocrite, on your bio you use the guidelines against some poor person who you probably flamed... but you yourself.. you don't follow them either!