Reviews for 2007842
BeautifulAssassin chapter 1 . 11/16/2007
I really like this...the way you repeated the number was great, and it had great rhythm. Keep writing!
Tytherpol chapter 1 . 10/22/2007
I really like this piece.

It feels sort-of strangely honest.

The third line of this poem is really strong. It made me read the rest of the piece.
Kissing Concrete chapter 1 . 10/15/2007
this has such a beautiful rhythm to it. i would appreciate it if you would capitalize your "I"s- it makes it a lot easier to read and more enjoyable. i love this. LOVE it. i love how you totally related school and love, and how you feel when you talk to that special someone. my favorite is the last stanza- how the speaker will always remember this day: the numbers are long gone from my hand, but they have planted themselves firmly in my mind. absolutely gorgeous. *puts on favs*
Eagle Seance chapter 1 . 10/12/2007
I like how the identity of the subject (not the narrator) remains anonymous, and how this emphasises the feelings instead of the subjects. Simple but good!