|Reviews for b u r n strong|
| burning in effigy chapter 1 . 10/13/2007
this makes me want to hug you so tightly.. and i don't hug anyone.. ever.
painfully beautiful; love how you are able to twist an IM conversation into a poem- brilliant
and it doesn't matter if the reader doesn't always understand.. i view poetry as a way for people to get their own feelings out (instead of having a breakdown which is not so pretty); as long as your writing means something to you, screw the rest of us (haha)
oh, and you're my new hero for also loving blessthefall (my friends complain too much about my taste in music.. blah)
excellent poem! :)
| tearing hands chapter 1 . 10/13/2007
It makes sense to me. I love the lines "words are empty and feeling is nothing / when they come from you." and "-i'm sorry for trying to mean something."
| Koriina chapter 1 . 10/12/2007
Wow . . . this struck so many chords with me. The raw emotion is almost too easy to comprehend, in that sick way that makes that little glimmer of doubt flare up for just a moment. I just really wish it wasn't gleaned from a conversation . . . Then, at least, I could take comfort in thinking it had never happened, that no one was like that.
Great job. )