Lovely.

Just lovely.

This story is the second of fiction press story that I have read. Boy, won't it make me anticipate in what other well written stories I can find here.

Love the background info you have for this kingdom. Love the relationship between 2 men in different social status and conquering it. I think you've made a good choice to stop where you did. If you tried to continue, I won't be able to day dream on what their future might be like. Which is always a sign of a well written story.

Please do write more.

Great Story, keep up the good work.

I just read the story, and I am stunned.

Its really a lovely story.

now I can go to sleep and dream about fluffy romances.

good night

This story is absolutely wonderful!

Wonderfully done!

I don't think I caught any spelling/grammar mistakes at all- kudos to you.

One thing that struck me funny was that Dahl-the way I said it in my head, was kinda like a drawn out Doll...Which makes me smile, that the General's name is similar to Doll..._

and one other point. Vidar and Vardon, were the two "real" royals, but Viran's name was similar and also started with a V- I wondered if this was on purpose or not, Because a couple times in the beginning I was confusing Vidar and Viran- but Maybe that's just me. Plus it would probably be a really big pain in the ass to change it...but I thought I would put the idea out there

Why doesn't this have more reviews?

I totally fell in love with this story, it's a real shame that it doesn't get more attention!

I love how this story was very plot driven, while it didn't fail to give me manlove

Excellent story! I really enjoyed it.

Oh, this is so lovely and passionate and heartbreaking! Can't wait to read the rest! :)

Wow... that was amazing! i totally fell in love with your characters! and the plot was insanely good. you had me crying, and laughing, and in total awe! you rock my socks ]

Wow. This is one of the first stories I have ever seen with an equal amount of romance and plot. I really enjoyed reading this, even though it took me two days! But anyway, you have a wonderful story here.

Fantastic! I don't know why there aren't more reviews. This is my second time around reading your story!

Wow. It's rare that you find stories of this scale on fictionpress. This is absolutely wonderful, probably quite publishable in my opinion. Great work and congratulations on writing such a brilliant story!

This is really sylenctone but I'm a bad girl and read this at work. I couldn't wait until I got home to tell you how fantastic this was! I'm grinning so hard that my face may be permenantly stuck that way. I loved this story so much and I'm just delighted that they were so welcomed into Evan's family. And they got to get married too! So wonderful!

Thank you ever so much for writing this and revisiting one of my very favorite couples!

Your fangirl incognito

jess

wow that was awesome lol its such a great story I loved it

Naughty naughty Dahle and Evan 3 hehe. that was so sweet that I was about to cry almost. Abright sun makes you a morning person *sweatdrops* ah well. This was good make more find ideas and wright them down!XD