|Reviews for Sapphires and Emeralds|
| Kura-sama chapter 22 . 5/11/2009
I can see that Aaron is trying to get Emee back ... but WHY won't he break it with Ette? He can't possibly think to be with Emee and Ette at the same time, so obviously he would know he need to break up with Ette if he start anything with Emee...
I can guess that he'll break with Ette IF Emee accepts him but he won't break with Ette otherwise...
He's really quite stupid. Doesn't he realize that if he want Emee, he stands a WAY better chance of getting her if he's not currently attached? He needs to show Emee that he's capable of breaking up with Ette before Emee can trust him again... (if ever)... Gosh he's stupid.
| Kura-sama chapter 21 . 5/11/2009
Yay. Aaron's FINALLY getting it. The guys should still beat him up or something
| Kura-sama chapter 20 . 5/11/2009
Is she bulimic anorexic again? Depression?
And I think Aaron is not suffering enough for his actions. Emee is so weak! Resist Emee, Resist!
| Kura-sama chapter 19 . 5/11/2009
You know... at this point I feel like Emee should totally fall in love with someone else and say "Fuck you" back at Aaron.
I'd say she should take it up with Alex.
Even if she doesn't end up with anyone, Aaron needs to be put in his place and knocked down several notches. And I'd love to know what's going through his head right now...
| Kura-sama chapter 18 . 5/11/2009
Dang. Did they use protection? I don't think they did.
I vote that Em's better in bed than Ette
| Kura-sama chapter 17 . 5/11/2009
I just remembered something. I forgot what chapter it was in, but it was where Emee was sitting in a garden somewhere to be by herself and Alex covered her eyes to ask who it was and she said Aaron etcetc and they ended up talking and Amee told Alex about how she's half-siblings with Will and Alex said he didn't know about it? I think that happened after the Christmas where Emee had to stay with Aaron's family right? And she told Aaron's parents that they were half-siblings because Aaron's dad asked if they were twins, and Alex was there. So Alex must have known already so I think that's an inconsistency.
Unless I remembered something wrongly...
| Kura-sama chapter 16 . 5/11/2009
The suspense is killing me... I guess I must read on XD
But wow... that's some screwed up relationships between everyone right now.
I'm still kind of not sure about Tristan and Cammie... I'm guessing that Cammie's OK with having a boyfriend who's going to have a baby on the way ... and that she has different thoughts about the situations compared to Em...
And wow at Aaron and Em X_X
I do hope Alex doesn't end up liking Em too much. Although, I think it'll be so ironic if history repeats with Em instead of Ette... just when she got the brothers to patch things up.
By the way, there's a bit of a error in this line somewhere just past half way down the chapter:
Alex rolled his eyes and stood. I could see he was furious. “Friend? She didn’t look like that when you had your tongue down your throat.” He sneered.
I believe it should be "had your tongue down HER throat".
| Kura-sama chapter 15 . 5/11/2009
I'm kind of not sure about Em and Tristan's chemistry just all of a sudden disappearing. Although I guess I can see how for teenagers, it won't be too hard getting over each other, especially when they were never truly totally in love yet.
Although... Tristan still has a baby on the way, why would he start a relationship with Cammie? Wouldn't that be dragging someone into his mess like he said he didn't want to with Em? Or is he just going to date Cammie casually? Because, in the way I'm thinking, if he can't be with Em because of the baby he shouldn't be with anyone else either... he was so crazy about Em IMO, it should take him longer to get over her...
But I still like the story. Does Alex like Em? Or is he just... I don't know, trying to steal her from Aaron or what? It seems like history is on it's way to repeating with the Alex and Aaron fighting over Ette, but its them fighting over Em...
| Kura-sama chapter 14 . 5/11/2009
Ahh are Aaron and Emee gona get together? What's Alex's role in this if there is any X_X
And I wonder what Tristan is up to...
| Kura-sama chapter 13 . 5/11/2009
I keep thinking Aaron might somehow come into the picture with Em romatically... I feel like Aaron is caught in two relationships, in love metally with one (Em) while in lust with the other (Ette)
I wonder how this will end up...? I feel so bad for Tristan and Em though... X_X But I guess 17 is too young for them to handle a baby on the way, it'll be so complicated being together and falling in love with some other woman carrying his baby at the same time.
| Kura-sama chapter 10 . 5/11/2009
It's really too bad that Em and Aaron aren't together XD They'd be a cute couple.
But I guess Tristan and Em are good together too XD
| Kura-sama chapter 9 . 5/11/2009
Wow... Aaron X Ette is so unhealthy. That's some screwed up relationship...
I was thinking, if Will announced to the school that Em's his sister then people probably won't be jealous and vindictive as much, since then there'll be a reason she's part of their group, and reason that they cannot resent.
Very cute story overall so far XD I think this is the second time I'm reading through, and I don't remember the original version so it's basically reading a new story again XD Loving it
By the way... I think it's kind of unrealistic that Em thought the tongue piercing was THAT painful. Especially if she was able to cut herself. I speak from experience... though I can't say she can't just be someone special with weird pain tolerance levels.
I have a tongue piercing and I must point out that it's really not painful at all. In fact, it's the least painful of all my piercings (I have 13, I think). I didn't feel the actual piercing process at all, since you don't actually have a lot of tactile nerve endings in your tongue. Right after the piercing, I can talk perfectly fine. It gets really swollen within the next hour though, then it's crazy swollen for the next week or so. Hurts to talk, but not extremely painful. Kind of like a burnt tongue, just uncomfortable.
I'd say my cartilage piercing on my ear hurts most. I barely feel any of my other piercings... but I guess I have high pain tolerace maybe X_x
| Breathtaking chapter 14 . 5/9/2009
OH. MY. GOD. She kissed Aaron! OH MY GOD Is all I have to say. I can't even come up with words to describe my thoughts. Oh my God just about covers it all so, thats my review...
Oh my God.
| Breathtaking chapter 11 . 5/6/2009
-GASP- .GOD. THEY BROKE UP! HE GOT ROSE PREGNANT! I can't even say anything! Im utterly and stupidly speachless! Im dumbfounded. Im flabberghasted. Im well, you get the point. I need to catch up! I gotta know what happens! Ok so on a much less surprised note...love it! I think you are a brilliant writer! I go 2 Port Huron High, we have a writing club and I'm gonna join it! YAY! But back to you...srry I get distracted easily. You are amazing. Brilliant. Fantastic. And any other word there is in the world that means utterly, magnificent! Wow that sounds really suck up-ish. LOL!
I have 2 storys now. 1 is done...The Scream, and the other...Revenge is still in the making. Thy are a little different. The Scream s a thriller/ romance. and Revenge is fantasy! LOL! So plz check 'em out and review! If you haven't noticed I review everytime I stop reading. I don't review every chapter. Only the chapter I finish on, but still! Ok g2g now but I love ur story and cant wait to finish it!
| silvershadow1379 chapter 25 . 5/6/2009
I just read the entire thing. story and I loved it.
Tristan was my favourite character and I'm so glad he and Emee stayed such good friends.
I loved Alex too and I'm happy that he and Emee finally got together, took them long enough lol