Reviews for that last attempt at saving us
whispered something profound chapter 1 . 10/13/2007
your work reminds me so much of myself and my writing. and this boy and this situation is me and my ex boyfriend perfectly
half-sketched.staccatos chapter 1 . 10/12/2007
konichi wa

This poem was absolutely amazing, but the last (or is second more accurate?) stanza was like a punch in the face. Like - nostalgia, wistful, and all that jazz... and suddenly you come to this defiant, sarcastic, pissed off ending: "in case you were too preoccupied to notice." It leaves me thinking, "What a jerk!" (I don't mean you, of course; I meant who this was talking about.)

Zaijen

-Shan-