|Reviews for Tick|
| Victoria Illusious chapter 1 . 6/22/2008
The timeing was perfect. You had rhythm and meter through out the whole thing.
I really liked the phrase " the clock clucked off another second." Interesting relation.
I like the surreality of it also. Nice concept and ending .
| RedHead7993 chapter 1 . 2/21/2008
this is kind of hard to follow... Is there a way to clean it up a little more? The way you word it, it sounds like it could be one or two men. It has a lot of potential though!
| Dr. Dreyyy chapter 1 . 10/12/2007
Give up u suck lol u suck big time lololol