Reviews for effortless |
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![]() ![]() ![]() what drew me in was the title and the summary combined; good thing the haiku was also very nice. i don't know what's so awesome about it and i had to seriously comb my mind for the right words but when i read it, the words sounded out in my head and i fell in love. i think it is the imagery, somehow. and the lovely little last line. a favourite, definitely. if there was such a thing as good haiku this would be it. |
![]() ![]() ![]() Wow. From so few words you managed to say so much, well done. |
![]() ![]() ![]() Some sort of encryption. I enjoy haikus like this one. I had an epiphany- this is poetry. Sometimes I feel guilty when I don't write cryptic poems, then I realize I'm apathetic and the feeling is gone. |
![]() ![]() ![]() I love the last line. You took what would have made a nice haiku of a moment in time and made it into something special. The title fits this perfectly. Peace, Daze |
![]() ![]() ![]() very pretty, it has a cool crisp feeling to it, lovely haiku |
![]() ![]() ![]() art and poetry are expression of impression... nice... |
![]() ![]() ![]() Visual, true and poignant. I like how this makes the reader think about the conclusion, and ponder the truth of the words. Great haiku. MD:77. |
![]() ![]() ![]() I like this. I can't explain why. I just do. Good job. |