|Reviews for Thief|
| Kiyane chapter 1 . 5/13/2008
This is a very interesting intro. And the names are unique...makes me wonder what time period this is written in.
How are you, btw? Well, I hope you're doing all right.
Update when you can :)
| Michael Gettings chapter 1 . 4/3/2008
I know this is a work in progress and that you, for some reason, have 4 more pages of this in the works... For over 2 years, but I just wanted you to know that as a 3 paragraph one-shot, without any background information on the characters, without any exposition - it works. Very well, I might add.
| White Rose Blossom chapter 1 . 10/14/2007
Interesting beginig...cant wait to see where it goes!
| HawkDancer chapter 1 . 10/13/2007
Oh, it's a great intro! It's so interesting. ] Please update soon!
| Xalga chapter 1 . 10/13/2007
I'm assuming this is the beginning to a larger overall story. While this does get someone's curiosity going about who they are and what was his dream. You did leave out many details that could make it even more enticing. Keep up the writing. I'll be checking on this one at random times. :)