Reviews for Paparazzi
simpleplan13 chapter 1 . 11/16/2007
I love all the repetition and the whole picture thing is great.. especially the ending.. great piece
no.peace.los.angeles chapter 1 . 10/20/2007
Aww, this is cute. I love " boy" and then "not everyone could be a r.a.i.n.b.o.w." I'm unsure why you chose to use the periods where you did, but in any case, it's a cute poem. Keep writing! :)
secret thoughts revealed chapter 1 . 10/20/2007
i can really relate to this one so did the guy ever figure it out?
half-sketched.staccatos chapter 1 . 10/14/2007
konnichi wa

Aww, that was a really sweet - sortof dispairing, forlorn - ending. :) I liked it.

Zaijen

-Shan-
thursdays and rain chapter 1 . 10/14/2007
aww, cute ;)