That was such a sweet story! They all can't be happily ever afters. )

hey... that was interesting - although kinda melodramatic ]

but thats ok D

just a note though- your tenses changed alot from present to past, but thats forgivable, seeing as english isn't your first language.

anyways, have fun! post more stuff, then you'll get better at english lolz

x

Ei...

That's awsome...

I really didn't expect that coming... (the ending)It really shook me off my seat or maybe I'm just so onion-skinned...(that doesn't matter!) Well, I'll say this one's good.

Keep it going...-

-catherine_kate-

Argh.. great story but I absolutely hated the ending... don't get me wrong it was written well, but I can't stand sad endings cos I'm a happy ending sort of girl :) I think there are too many sad endings in real life so maybe that's why people like to write happy endings on fictionpress? Anyway, nice writing style, but I hope that if you write other stories, that they will have HAPPY endings. *beams*

I love it even if its a tragic love story is really good i even cried it remind me of someone although i would love to read ur other version the one whit a happy ending!

Wow, that was really brave. I really liked it. Brought tears to my eyes. Some constructive criticism would be that I wanted more closure at the end.. did Aidan die while he was with her? or was Isabella hallucinating what could've been? I'm going to author alert you because I'm interested into seeing more of your writing . I really liked it. )

-Eniisa