|Reviews for Return to my past|
| Twilight Starr chapter 1 . 10/22/2007
| AuraBorealis chapter 1 . 10/19/2007
good work. keep on writing
| XxXKristie MarieXxX chapter 1 . 10/15/2007
This is really good! I'm so adding this to favs!
| Almost-human chapter 1 . 10/15/2007
That was awsome! I realy felt it in here(points to mental heart).
| Eagle Seance chapter 1 . 10/13/2007
Almost like a song, very beautifully written.
| An Inside Joke chapter 1 . 10/13/2007
I like the blend of general philosophising and direct address to the persona's lover. Good rhythm, but it didn't thematically feel like much more than a typical break-up poem.