Reviews for The Dark Night |
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![]() ![]() ![]() ADORABLE! I loved this story so much! |
![]() ![]() Loved it |
![]() ![]() ![]() beautiful |
![]() ![]() ![]() love it! |
![]() ![]() ![]() Well that was a chapter FULL of all sorts of action. o.o |
![]() ![]() ![]() I absolutely LOVE Niko and Maggie's relationship! |
![]() ![]() ![]() This is so AWESOME! I'm so excited to read the next chapter! |
![]() ![]() ![]() even better! I love this story so much! |
![]() ![]() ![]() AH! I loved it! YAY for Niko! :) |
![]() ![]() ![]() Gooey beyond belief but otherwise quite alright. Climax was a little of a downer, could have just let it be the memory taken and her test of immortality I think. |
![]() ![]() ![]() Ohh...tense :s I found it really intriguing and can't wait to read more. I get so paranoid walking in the dark...too many episodes of Doctor Who :D |
![]() ![]() ![]() This is a good story, though some of the dialogue is slightly unreal. Sometimes it helps to read it aloud to see whether it's something that someone would normally say. There are a few grammar mistakes, most likely typos, but it's always good to triple check your work and just pressing f7 in Word doesn't always count. Otherwise the story is pleasant to read and some good thinking has gone into it. Keep pumping out some good pieces. C: |
![]() ![]() Incredible story! I had a lot of fun reading it! |
![]() ![]() ![]() Wel I'm stupid. Last time I read this it wasn't updated, but now it's finished! I guess I didn't realize cause it didn't have COM in the summary, but still! Haha, well I love this story, I'm now going to re-read it, and I hope you continue to write! |
![]() ![]() Hi I love all your stories, and I really love this one. Are you ever going to finish it? (As an author whose had all her stories put on hold over the last 4 years, I understand that life gets crazy) but I hope that you'll update this one day soon, as it's great and I love it! Stephanie AKA MolestAPeanut |