Good. The end felt a bit rushed, and a couple spots were a bit soap opera-ish, but it was overall good :) Keep it up, can't wait to see more from you.

Faith

I loved this. I cried when Maggie died :(. But I was soo relieved and happy when they were together again. I'm such a sucker for a happy ending.

Lucy

Such a sweet and thrilling story, frightening and endearing. Everything worked really too perfectly but I love that, happiness, good health and luck are the ideals we all wish for.

This story has an interesting plot, but its ridiculously immaturely written. A lot of the 'hot, passionate, muscled, pouty' type descriptions make it hard to take your writing seriously. We know from the first description that Niko is big, strong, and muscular. There's no need to constantly remind us. We also don't need the constant reminding that Maggie is a little spitfire with big boobs. That's pretty much the typical characters for a romance story.

THOROUGHLY enjoyed this one! Great job tying up all the loose ends. I can't wait for your next one. I appreciate that you always finish your stories. Thanks for sharing with us!

Yeah, you're almost done; and the epilogue's already up! I love the happy ending you gave them. Well done!

Sequel sequel sequel! Please I beg of you...I love it to much to have it end... : (

Great Chapterness! Good job!

Hey Girl

Well done. Loved the chapter. Yay! Maggie is immortal. As always, an amazing story.

Enjoy Twilight. E-mail me and let me know if it as good as the book!

Lex

Naw what an amazingly cute chapter. It made me all bubbly and warm inside When I read about the patio and the dinner, it was like Oh he's going to propose ;D That was so sweet I can't wait for the weddingchapter, possible events are already rolling around in my head. Maggie and Nico are such a cute couple I don't know whjat more to say about the chapter than: C

Good, but remember to combine words. There's a lot of you are's and stuff like that, which just interrupts the flow of the story. Other than that, I liked it. Keep it up and update soon.

Faith

Love it! Can't wait to see how the wedding goes...

so when is his brother going to strike?

Hey Cat

Nice chapter. I came on and checked and was like "yay!". Can't wait to see what other stories you have up your sleeve. Twilight? I have to wait another month for it! Can't wait to see it though.

Lex

Great chapter, I wonder whats gonna happen next...can't wait for Twilight either and Happy Early Birthday!