|Reviews for The Dark Night|
| Sarahj259 chapter 17 . 11/15/2008
great chapterness! Good job!
| Esioul chapter 16 . 10/8/2008
I can't remember if I ever written a review for this story ( I read to much I think) But I love it
Was this the last chapter or will there be more of this lovely story?
I don't really know where to begin, I can't decide wether or not I liked the amnesia thing, but I did like the part with his mother, that she tried to ease his pain.
Will Maggie be like Niko now? A hunter? That would be so nice (thats how I planned it in my head xD) I hope that there is more to come
| Adders721 chapter 16 . 9/28/2008
hey so I think u should do like an epilogue and explain like how she is back and if she is now immortal cause I think she should be yeah do an epilogue!
| violet-eyez chapter 16 . 9/26/2008
is this the end?
| Sarahj259 chapter 16 . 9/26/2008
is that the ending? I hope not! I difinately want some more of this story... Great storyness! Good job!
| Faith Adeline chapter 16 . 9/25/2008
I think it's weird that none of them haven't even questioned how she's back. I know if I saw someone standing in my doorway, that I had just given a funeral too, I'd probably be scared shitless. While this is a supernatural story, you've still got to have elements of realism in it. So I would write that in. I think there needs to be more skepticism. More doubt.
| Faith Adeline chapter 15 . 9/25/2008
Hmm, it's a bit strange...in an intriguing way. I still think you're moving a bit fast paced. Add more, it's alright to have filler chapters. You don't need something huge happening in every chapter. Ya know? By adding more detail, you'll be giving the story more...hmm...alright, I'm gonna use depth again hah. If you have any questions, let me know. Also, proof-read. There's quite a few mistakes. Like, tanks instead of thanks. Things like that.
| Faith Adeline chapter 14 . 9/25/2008
Hmm, I feel that these last few chapters have been far too fast paced, not enough detail. Plus, it's all a little soap opera-ish. If you go back, add more scenes, give it a bit more depth. :)
| Carina chapter 1 . 9/24/2008
Nice story so far.
| cytl101 chapter 11 . 9/14/2008
and the suspense...
| Yuliya chapter 11 . 9/10/2008
i totally love this story hope you update soon
| Belle Morte858 chapter 11 . 8/8/2008
WOW that was awsome! update again soon!
| BeingMyself chapter 3 . 8/1/2008
Just a few spelling errors but other than that, I like it. I love the name Niko but Nikolai is even hotter, aha.
| ReniBeniBaby chapter 11 . 7/11/2008
totally amazing story! I usually just read a story and not reply but I just couldn't do that with this story... The story is great and PLEASE CONTINUE WRITING THIS STORY!
| violet-eyez chapter 11 . 7/6/2008
how is it that his brother is still alive when every1 in his family died? and can't maggie become a immortal?