yay, an update! i really enjoy reading this story, and i can't wait to see what happens next each time a chapter is done. thanks, and update soon :D

LOVELY Just got caught up. This is an amazing story! Once again, BEAUTIFUL! Keep it up. Love the whole thing. Especially this chapter. I dunno. The only thing I didn't like about this chapter was the fact that Maggie wasn't horrified for a longer period of time after killing something for the first time. That was a bit short, but still great. Love it, Love you. Happy new years by the way people!

I love it!

update

Thanks so much for the update! I love this story so I'm so excited about the upcoming chapter. Well-done storytelling! Have a great New Year!

That was intense and exciting. I hope to read more soon. And keep up the good writing.

great chapter loved it and it was so long

hope you can update soon loved it lots

StephanieWIlson

Good chapter, I'm always game for a good action scene. The only thing off was you spelled stake steak, haha. So, he was killed by a thick piece of meat lol. Keep up the good work and update soon!

Faith

AHH.

i love the story.

and Mark finally knows about them..sorta.

haha. annyywhoos. PLEASE UPDATE!

I really love this story. It's so good. You left off at such a peaceful place, so now I can't wait to see what happens next. :D UPdate soon!

that was really good. I can't wait for the next chapter. Where did her brother go I can't remember? sorry.

i am IN love with this story,

i think its so cute! lol,

you have got to update!

and sorry about the hectic.. ness of college?

good luck with your last year of college!

OMG. THEY ARE SO CUTE!

I realy want maggie and niko to end up

together. and i LOVE the name Niko :)

ohh, i like :)

Very cute chapter. But hopefully some action is coming up lol. I love me some fight scenes. Hah. Keep up the good work, you're doing great.

Faith