Sad but a bit too rushed.

Anyway I like the story.

Oh, I like it! It's very well done and very realistic. I've raid so many stories that's been so romanticized during the 18th century period. My only real suggestion ( and this could just be me being picky ) but that would just make the number 6 and write it in words and not numbers. But very nice work for writing a story that you got in a flash and writing it all in one setting. I'd love to see you write more historical stories.