|Reviews for morgan|
| Twilight Starr chapter 1 . 10/21/2007
That's sad that you haven't spoken since.
Good story/whatever you want to call it.
| Xalga chapter 1 . 10/14/2007
I try to help others with things as well. Firstly, you use 'and' many times to start a sentence which makes the word loose its power. You do have decent word selection and they do work well with describing this actually. Just thought I'd try to help. Keep up the writing.