Reviews for Lips Burn Caustic |
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sweets555 chapter 6 . 10/24/2007 ilovevito. with all my heart. can i steal him? shit, hes not gay too, right? this story is killing my fantasys. *pout* great chapter! |
i found alaska chapter 6 . 10/23/2007 rosco is too cute. even though he's mean. haha. another excellent chapter. this story is just too good for words. love it. |
deadaccount38289 chapter 6 . 10/23/2007 OHMYGODILOVEMASON. so much. sosososomuch. when he licked rosco's face i promptly had a giggle fit, which turned into a coughing fit because i'm quite sick at the moment, and earned myself a very odd look from my mother. and i love vito and his randomness(his laughing fits and then trying to act cool so random. so cute. and made me laugh out loud every time, seriously). and liam (the way he talks so reminds me of a friend of mine). and... actually, i rather love all of your characters. they're all very endearing in their own way. and the line "Fuck up her face." was so utterly unexpected and amazing xD and. that is all i have to say. besides: love. MUCH LOVE. MUCHO MUCHO LOVE-O. (whatever. i don't know spanish. i take french.) |
lucretiabaine chapter 5 . 10/22/2007 Hahaha. This is one of the most amusing things I've seen on here in a while. So hilarious. I love how you drop myspace whore names. I love how Rosco noticed that chick's muffin top. Hahaha. The only thing is, the way Rosco talks, I wouldn't expect him to be an assholey homophobe. It's almost cute for him, due to your narration. And I'm guessing he'll change his ways anyway. |
sweets555 chapter 5 . 10/21/2007 hehe. ur cute. graet chapter! rosco makes me laugh |
Full Stop chapter 5 . 10/21/2007 Awesome chapter! Reading about the main character being tortured is always entertaining. btw. YAY FOR GAY DUMBLEDORE! I can't wait for the fanfic. |
Scene-Damagexx chapter 5 . 10/21/2007 hahaha Rosco threw up thinking about boysex. xDD That greatly amused me, and the fact that he had to go sit with emo kids. He needs to get the stick outta his ass and realize that they're pretty nifty people. I want an emo/scene kid boyfriend. Yum. *gigglesnort* O is Mason really that big of a bitch? Oh em geezy. Spill the beans or something. I want to know. Cause he can't be that big of a jerk. Hm. Maybe he's just too pretty. And not fat. Hahaha. Oh my God, I love Vinny. He's the best-and you're right. Looking up Jack Nicholson made his character all the more better. Go look up Jono some day. He's pretty. At least, I think he's pretty. Or, maybe if you're in a techno mood, Breathe Carolina. fufufu. I suddenly have the urge to go play a game of pokemon cause of all the people going "fufufu" in the game...but my brother's DS has disappeared and well, it's just not as cool. :[ Ah, well. Update son, kthx. I'm really enjoying this. XD |
i found alaska chapter 5 . 10/21/2007 you continue to amaze me with every new chapter. your writing is some of the best on this site. |
deadaccount38289 chapter 5 . 10/21/2007 Lo and behold, another chapter appears. You, my friend, are divine. And I totally heard about the 'Dumbledore is gay' thing while I was writing my review for the fourth chapter. Creepy. And my boyfriend has the exact same Mindless Self Indulgence shirt you described. And I'm starting to get seriously creeped out and am thinking we have some frightening mental connection. "His voice...it makes me think about boys and sex and sex and boys and boys with sex and all the nastiness and wrongness and satanic arts and male sex and more boys and sex and more sex and boys and WHERE THE HELL DO THEY PUT THAT THING OH GOD SAVE ME." ohh my god that made me laugh so much. ohh god. hahahahaha i love you so much. and thank you for responding to all my reviews! i feel so loved. :D |
deadaccount38289 chapter 4 . 10/21/2007 I have the exact From First to Last poster you talked about, haha. And I love Charlie the Unicorn. And Alex Heartbreaker. And Matthew Lush. And Jeffree Star. And… This story. |
deadaccount38289 chapter 3 . 10/21/2007 I didn't think it was sucky. It was quite amusing, in fact. :) "Indirect kiss", hahaha, nice. I hate homecoming dances - at my school they have an unfortunate tendency to become a massive group of freshmen grinding up against each other frighteningly. Ew much? Yeah. |
deadaccount38289 chapter 2 . 10/21/2007 Haha, I agree with you about The Catcher in the Rye. I started to read it and then just... Couldn't get further then the first chapter. It wasn't at all as good as I expected from all the hype. Anyways, this chapter was really funny. The three henchmen were, well, annoying, but still entertaining. Great job! And I don't think it's too slow moving. Even when there's not too much happening Rosco's opinions keep it super entertaining. :D |
deadaccount38289 chapter 1 . 10/21/2007 I am in love with the story already. I mean, I normally hate kids like Rosco, but he's hilarious. And Everett sounds gorgeous. And their relationship is just... fantastic and entertaining. xD I'm going to keep reading now. |
Full Stop chapter 4 . 10/21/2007 o. Cool story! I really like it so far. You have good characterizations. |
sweets555 chapter 4 . 10/20/2007 good chapter. tho i want an update. i wanna kno whats going on with everett. oh, and love you too |